Webnovel Author: Maryam_Aldariya

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Replied to ApplepixOwO

charlie is cute tho but nvrmnd. you can have him 🥹

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Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Replied to ApplepixOwO

HAHAHA 😝

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Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Posted

Hi Author, First of all, I can catch the story vibe pretty easily & somehow your story had the same vibe from The neverland anime. I don't know if you knew that anime but I can sense the similarity from your story. Well developed story structure, beautiful storyline and character development need more depth. But I wish you all the best and please keep up the good work!

Epitome of Magus

Fantasy · AkionF

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Posted

This book still need more chapter to update. I like how you made it so easy but I was hoping to see how this book will growth, keep up the good effort! Hope to read your book again!

Something Desires You

Horror · Kihitakamy

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Posted

I loved how you use simple english and the story structure are well written. Somehow your story vibe is quite similar with a novel I used to read. The character are well developed, beautiful story line. Hoping to see your book bloom into something more. All the best author!

The Shadowking's Sin(Shadoukingu No Tsumi)

Fantasy · Mrtin_Monarch

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Replied to marieeena

Hi mareena! First of all thank you for your review, it really meant a lot for me as a author. I will try my best to keep my grammar in check and yes I would love to have your copy review. Please sent it to me 🥹

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Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Replied to diddingsdddd

Thanks JLSkiddings! Yea I have a slightest problem since english is not my first language 😂😂 but thank you for your honest review

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Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Posted

oh my goodness! I love how you describe everything and helping a poor reader like me to understand it easily . I love your character so much and i really really enjoy reading! Fantastic work! Nicely done! 👏👏🔥🔥

That Fair-Faced 'Sage'. {COMPLETED}

Fantasy · Daoist_BaekYeol

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Commented

okay i like this guy alrdy

Stranger, "You think I won't dare to?! Why don't you bring it over here?!" He smirked, the guzheng was something he could play flawlessly, even in his sleep, and he wondered whether to give the people here some entertainment.

That Fair-Faced 'Sage'. {COMPLETED}

Fantasy · Daoist_BaekYeol

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Commented

omg! he did not—😂😂😂😂😂

He rose a hand and spoke quite loudly, for such a light voice. "You there! The fellow playing music." he hiccupped a little. "What awful techniques are you using? Are you at war with your strings?"

That Fair-Faced 'Sage'. {COMPLETED}

Fantasy · Daoist_BaekYeol

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Commented

"Cui! This fellow's wife didn't *light enough incense sticks before the marriage!"

That Fair-Faced 'Sage'. {COMPLETED}

Fantasy · Daoist_BaekYeol

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Commented

thank you for explaining! 🥹🥹

*Kowtow- kneel and touch the ground with the forehead in worship or submission as part of Chinese custom.

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Fantasy · Daoist_BaekYeol

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Commented

usuwuwuwuwu this is interesting!!

*Xuè Shèngrén - Blood Sage.

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Fantasy · Daoist_BaekYeol

Maryam_Aldariya

1yr

Posted

You really have a good story here! I mean how on earth you can create this kind of story?! It’ beautifully written and the storyline changes is fuhh 🔥 I hope you can continue your masterpiece and keep on writing more interesting story! Somehow i feel like this is Isekai/game genre HAHAH!