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The Shadowking's Sin(Shadoukingu No Tsumi)
4.39 (16 ratings)
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The forces of Order and Chaos have been at war since the beginning of the time. Kioku Himira, the next ruler of the Shadow Realm is forced to join the war in order to save his allies.
However, the war is not as it seems, all methods of viewing the future are clouded as existance is thrown into chaos and hidden secrets are revealed that could spark a greater war.
Kioku embarks on the journey to prepare for his rise to the throne and the biggest war for supremacy in all of existence.
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The author presents us with a pretty in-depth novel with great worldbuilding and characters. One thing people don’t often don’t point out and that I like are the chapter names themselves—simple without spoiling too much. Who needs a cliffhanger when the next chapter is called demons? My only complaint is the immediate info-dump in the prologue and some paragraphs being a little awkward (for example the absurb number of times “Chaos” is mentioned in the prologue). Overall, it’s a great story that deserves more views, especially for that chapter lenght.
Honest review. I won't talk much about the writing since I'm not an expert myself so I'll be reviewing my reading experience instead. I think the biggest problem in the story is merely the lack of punctuations and typos. The author is great with his words, I like how his writing seems to have a life of its own and how it flows so well. However, the constant typos and lack of punctuation sometimes forced me to stop and read the sentence all over again to understand. Other than that, the cover is eyecatching enough, the synopsis is interesting enough, and the world building was done fast, which is to my taste. For those who enjoy this kind of genre, I think this book is worth the shot. If the plot developes well, this book may become a popular one.
Anyone who is wondering if they should read it or not then let me tell you, you won't disappoint even a single bit, the story is written quite well and it makes you wanna keep reading it...
The characters are very interesting and have great unique traits about them, this is one helluva novel. I definitely recommend this for those who wanna give it a try.
The world that the author had created was generally good just somewhat confusing with its objective of the story. Have to reread it not to miss out some of the details. I really like the fight scenes in this story though. They were quite well written. The characters were interesting. Although there were grammatical errors throughout, it wasn't to the point that it made reading uncomfortable. Overall, great work author.
Overall, I had a pleasant reading experience following this story. The largest detriment to this story is its structure. A lot of the dialogue and paragraphs merge together, and that actually discombobulated me as I read it. The world building started decently with the prologue exposition dump, but I still found myself confused at times. I had to reread a few times to make sure. The second detriment was the characters. Unless I just blanked over them mentally, thee wasn't too much different in how many of them sounded, at least I'm dialogue. I didn't perceive much of a personality, until the master pupil fight scene. I did enjoy the fight scene, and thought it was interesting. I recommend a review of the story, and make alterations. This does have potential, so do not give up or toss out the idea behind it.
The important thing is that this book is interesting. If you don't see it that way, then relax your mind and read each and every word, then you will understand the high level of imagination that our author has.
I loved how you use simple english and the story structure are well written. Somehow your story vibe is quite similar with a novel I used to read. The character are well developed, beautiful story line. Hoping to see your book bloom into something more. All the best author!
Review written as of 4 ch being published (5 w/prologue). What to say, well, there's nothing particularly outstanding. Frankly, the novel reads like a stereotypical superpower shounen manga. Personally, that style where characters are shouting out their moves and it's a rambunctious tone where the fights don't really seem to matter (almost like a sport) is not really my thing. But I've read things that aren't my things because of other factors, usually the writing quality. It isn't bad here, it's just extraordinarily ordinary. There are grammar mistakes throughout, but they aren't disruptive. Characters don't seem particular deep, but they aren't super shallow either. There's a bit too much exposition for my taste, and the plot is similar to the thousands of other shounen-esque novels out there. In other words, it is completely average. It's fine. It's not bad, but it's not good either. The fight scenes were probably the best thing about it since they tended to be a bit more descriptive than the rest of the novel. I don't really have much else to say, it's fine.
These characters are incredibly interesting and have depth. My general impression of the story is one with lots of twist and turns and non stop excitement in the coming chapters. :)
Okay! the major thing is that this book is interesting. If you don't see that, then relax your mind and read each and every single word, then you will understand the high level of imagination our author has. The detailed work is awesome and incredible!. The author should pls write more Chapters cause this is going good! TBH.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. hope you will upload more chapters . recommended:)
Nice and interesting Synopsis, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The flow of the story is well-written, and the characters are interesting too. Nice choice of words, specially the dialouges. Your writing style is great, I can easily picture the scenes. 😁🙌🏻 There are some typos, but it's fine. The novel is still easy to understand, and easy to follow on what was happening. Keep up the good work, Author! 😊👍🏻 I'll keep this in my collection and read it on my free time. [img=recommend][img=recommend] A little suggestion though, try to separate some paragraphs depending on who is talking. For example; ...when he woke up, he groaned and said to himself, "Who am I?" They boy didn't expect any reply but surprisingly he heard a voice saying, "You owe me for saving your life." It's just a suggestion though, 😅😁. Sorry for the long review. 😅 But, really, you're awesome! 👍🏻
so far so good, the characters are lifelike and the dialog is well written, I put this in my library and will let the chapters build up before reading more.
I just finished reading this book and I have to say i love the storyline and that excitement it gaves. but still it's just few chapters please upload more.
I think that this book succeeds at having good worldbuilding and a positive atmosphere that makes the reader feel like they are playing in the world through the eyes of the mc. I think the chapter names aren't the best, mostly because of spoilers, but everything is good so far. Thanks author!