A) well there are shamans so I the possibility of ghosts existing is high imo
ch 0 4 Unexpected Meeting (1)
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
9/10 chance they get murdered here tbh
The place we were currently on, looked like a forest.
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
collapsing after four minutes is something else..
She falls to the ground and started huffing.
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
always gotta be prepared
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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
thanks for pointing that out
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Action · Zyusa
1st chapter was great! 100% Hooked me in, and with one damn annoying cliffhanger, I was actually looking forward to the next chapter. The writing quality is extremely good, Also the first time I've ever seen someone live up to their username... Although in an unfortunate way.
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One girl.
ch 0 1 Beginnings (1)
Action · Zyusa
You are right; It's not logical that he lets his classmates die but rescues a random baby. I was going to talk more about his school and his experiences to make sense, but I didn't. However, I see I should, so thank you for letting me know. And I was planning to talk about his backstory and why he could kill someone with no remorse, just wasn't now. And as for Dorian being aware of the betrayal and doing nothing about it, he's cocky. He thinks he'll be able to 100% beat Jason. Thank you for reading and letting me know some things that don't have sense.
ch 0 1 Awaiting Justice
Action · Zyusa
Thank you for the compliment, and indeed he is fast to adapt, however I can't really show that off atm.
ch 0 1 Beginnings
Action · Zyusa
Jason claimed his first human life- one of many, woohoo!
ch 0 2 Fleeing
Action · Zyusa
I definitely like this book. It has great writing quality and I didn't notice any mistakes spelling-wise, same with grammar. Very unexpected start and passing of someone, a bit confused but I do like the story. Although the author said they wouldn't dwell much into the VR aspect, I would like to see it be a somewhat important part of the story if it isn't going to be.