Webnovel Author: PixiesONE - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Author here, I hope you all enjoy this new novel im starting, ill try to get a consistent stream of new chapters going for all of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fairly decent start for what could be an interesting story. While its too early to judge the story so much, the pacing does feel somewhat rushed. The author should probably let their writing breathe more, and create a better flow of events. Obviously, I'm not quite so competent a writer myself, so this is all I can pick out really without reading more thoroughly. In the end, it seems decent and the author should definitely continue.

While the story seems interesting enough, the writing quality is a bit lacking at times, edits could be made to easily make it better, but overall, this seems like a decent book, though im not usually one to read romance novels, so my opinion on it may not be the best.

This actually was captivating me from the beginning, the world is just interesting enough to make me enjoy the ideas of it quite a bit, and the story surrounding it seems quite interesting as well. Writing quality is pretty good and overall, this seems good! Keep up the work!

Reading through the first few chapters, this is seeming to be pretty good. Descriptions are well detailed and really help me to imagine the scenarios and scenes in it. The pace is good and the story seems interesting, overall seems to have great potential, keep it up!