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SKMnovels
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Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed
His teammates were similarly equipped, all in epic gear, a formidable lineup. Any player here would drool with envy. Even though "Eternity" had been running for years, most players still struggled for a piece of dark gold equipment; epic gear was nearly mythical!
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
Another grammar error
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
Using the apostrophe is not necessary anymore and you also incorporated it wrongly.
Jason and his team were currently venturing into the top dungeon of "Eternity," the "Frost Crown" in hell mode. This mode had never been conquered, with the leaderboard still empty.
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
You’ve already made it clear that it is a game, no need for repetition. Also, there is an error there; Jason played AS a grand mage
In "Eternity," a fantasy game, Jason played a grand mage. After several years of operation, most players in this world had reached the maximum level, including Jason.
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
I look forward to that
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PANDORA-Rise of the fool
Fantasy · just_stay
On a side note, rate the book outta 10 and reason for rating.
ch 30 One year later
Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Understandable since the time skip shows him having 60+ abilities. Thanks I’ll do that
ch 30 One year later
Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Thoughts? I accept all kinds of criticism
ch 30 One year later
Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Start of a New World
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Start of a New World
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Start of a New World
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
Not bad. You’ve inspired me to write a biography someday. My advise to you is to keep your head down and concentrate on what matters. I’m not that old, but I have gotten a number of experiences in this my short life and I know how it’s best to stay away from certain people in other to grow. “Selena” has taught you an important lesson. I don’t know what that is, but I‘m sure you already know. Live a good life Gabriel Tempo. Stay away from women until you’re ready.
ch 15 CHAPTER FOURTEEN – EPILOGUE
2022 (Based On A True Story)
Teen · GabrielTembo
Hard to read because I felt I had to remember too many things and my attention span couldn’t keep up. Work on your chapter and please, put a synopsis
ch 0 1 Wedge
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez