Webnovel Author: Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

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"Time often gets the better of an old man like me"- Winslow

ch 0 7 GoldenIsles!

Honing my system in the way of the alchemist!

Fantasy · Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

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"Time often gets to an old man like me"- Winslow

ch 0 7 GoldenIsles

Honing my system in the way of the alchemist!

Fantasy · Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

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"she wouldn't stop bothering me about taking a photo on her first expedition"- Qifrey Hieheart

ch 0 5 New aisle

Honing my system in the way of the alchemist!

Fantasy · Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

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"Learning my system the right way"- Aurelia

ch 0 6 Learning the mechanics

Honing my system in the way of the alchemist!

Fantasy · Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

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Interesting story, though at some parts it tells more than it shows, the dialogue are stiff sometimes and a bit long. but the premise makes up a lot for it. Good job author

Crystal In Blood

Fantasy · AnikaSilverheart

Theothecolossal

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Sele's first day as a maid ^^

ch 0 4 The expedition

Honing my system in the way of the alchemist!

Fantasy · Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

4mth

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Well-written and articulated, still in it's early phases but everything was well thought out and flows pretty well. Keep it up!

Into Your Dreams

Fantasy · PoeticPancake

Theothecolossal

4mth

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Not much to review on from the first chapter but it's a nice start, the mc is great and confident and the story so far seems promising, though you need to update more often

Celestial Pervert: Reincarnation of an Immortal

Fantasy · Evil_Avatar

Theothecolossal

4mth

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The cover and the name is amazing, i like names like this, simply adore them XD, the story is also great and the characters are delicately crafted and fits so well with the narrative.

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Theothecolossal

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Replied to SayofChains88

born

I sat on my bed listening to his lecture, the histories of humans, and the things they had done to us in the past. He told them to me in hopes of scaring me, to make me think humans were no good, but in all truth, they only fascinated me even more because of it.

And a new dawn to thou i've loved before

Teen · Theothecolossal

Theothecolossal

5mth

Replied to Noveltea

he can decide to be a trainer but still has his fear of pokemon which he has to overcome over time while being exposed to them

"how about a battle while you're here. if I remember right you were the only one who didn't get to battle cuz of your little struggle back then so this will be your first!" He says holding up Charmander's empty pokeball.

POKEMON RISE

Anime & Comics · Theothegiant

Theothecolossal

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no- pokemon are like animals you like some your scared of others, he was still scared of pokemon zorua being the closest to a fox a normal animal so he's not as frightened by it

"how about a battle while you're here. if I remember right you were the only one who didn't get to battle cuz of your little struggle back then so this will be your first!" He says holding up Charmander's empty pokeball.

POKEMON RISE

Anime & Comics · Theothegiant

Theothecolossal

5mth

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A good story with a great premise and an interesting cast of characters if you like stuff like this i would highly recommend it, the author has a great way with words.

The CEO's Seductive Doll

Urban · kasurindusk

Theothecolossal

5mth

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A great captivating story with tons of great characters and world-building, I would totally recommend this book for those who are sleeping on it! keep it up author you have the makings of a top writer.