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Bro, I hope Blorg stays, I love this guy

"And this, this is my masterpiece." Blorg suddenly said before grabbing something and showing it to Carl as he zoomed out the camera, making Carl gulp as he stared at the giant sword that Blorg was holding with his two hands. The sword had all the colors of the rainbow, if not even more.

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Well, I just caught up with the novel, and yeah, the change of the POV in my opinion definitely helped out, I liked it even when it was in the first person, but the third person just flows better tbh. The characters are well made, the banter might not be the best, I do like some parts, some not that much, but it's not enough to make me stop reading it. So far so good author, keep it up! :D

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Sensitive things, huh?

Carl and Isabella got in his car and drove to her apartment, and then Carl helped her pack. She didn't let him help out with everything, she made sure to pack her underwear and other 'sensitive' stuff by herself.

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