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kingsdog
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I'm sorry, its me again. liking the book I just think you should fix the mistake here. ( :
The next kid to touch the crystal is the same as the first one, after a few .ore kids failed to make the crystal glow it is now Kayla's turn he is one of the five kids alongside Damian that is chosen by Garu to represent the Miller City Shadow Hall.
I retired from being an Assassin and now I sell Battle Beasts
Fantasy · VIZCO
I dont mean to be rude or anything, but you should use found instead of find. But other than that i'm liking your book so far.
After being pushed away Damian find his footing and dashed towards his opponent again but this time he made a feint attack he aimed for his opponent's neck again but when the sword-wielding kid was about to block he changed it into a downward slash, he successfully wounded his opponent's shoulder, the sword kid stepped back clutching his wounded shoulder, he looked angrily towards Damian and initiated the attack this time, he made continuous sword attacks and some of his attacks hit Damian but it is not life-threatening, their exchange of attacks continued for a few more minutes before they both retreated. Still clutching his shoulder the sword kid is now out of breath, while Damian on the other hand while being wounded all over his body he is still full of energy.
I retired from being an Assassin and now I sell Battle Beasts
Fantasy · VIZCO
how did i get here
ch 0 1 well well well ... I see we are stuck here togetter.
I don't know how to get here
Fantasy · unsatisfiedwithyou
Been gone for a bit. Sad to see no new chapters . hope you didn't drop it. :)
ch 10 Chapter 10: Kane Arrives
I retired from being an Assassin and now I sell Battle Beasts
Fantasy · VIZCO