Webnovel Author: yunjun - Novel Collection

Well, people have different tastes, can't satisfy everyone.

Thanks for the review!There will be more characters in the future that are not just disposable extras, but are important to the story, so they should be more fleshed out. I hope that your opinion on the character design will change then.And I haven't been paying much attention to the descriptions, so thanks for pointing that out! I'll try my best to improve (:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! <:

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Excellent start. The characters are well-designed, especially Arthur, the protagonist. From what I've seen so far, he seems to be a complex and interesting person. Moreover, his initial confusion after regression and interactions with family, as well as new goals, feel believable. There is not much I can say about the story development, since it's only the beginning, but the concept is interesting. I'm curious about his past and how he will proceed from now on. The writing style is great, nothing to criticize here. Overall, very promising, would recommend!

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Well-written, immersive story with an interesting cast. The characters and their interactions feel real, I especially like the relationship between the twins, Raten and Kaiyen. Writing quality is excellent, through all the chapters I've read I only spotted a few minor mistakes, but they didn't affect the reading experience at all. If there's anything to complain about, it's that there is not enough of it! Great job, Author! (:

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Compulsory author review! So, the story starts slow, but there will be more action later. Also, while MC is overpowered, he's not omnipotent. He might appear this way at first, but the story is told from his perspective, so there is some bias. As I've mentioned in the synopsis, there will be no harem. Only single female lead. She should appear somewhere in volume 2, but it will take a while for the romance part to develop. I think that's all from me for now. I hope you'll give this story a chance, and if you have any questions, you can ask me in the comments! (:

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