Thanks a lot! :)
Now then, where should I start first? In fact, I haven't read any xianxia novels in the last few months. S in the beginning, I need to recall how the cultivation world work first. Honestly, I think the story is quite good. But maybe you can add a little more description to your narratives. I also have quite a confusion in differentiating between the narratives and Ba Yihan's thought. How about you also give each character some kind of trait that only each of them has? It will give some kind of unique vibes that stand out from others. Overall, although the genre of BL is personally not my usual cup of tea, I've a good time enjoying it. Wish you the best on your journey :)
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Thank you :) Hope you witness our journey in this story.
Thank you! Wish you all the best too :)
It's a cliche plot. But it's surprisingly good although I've just read about first ten chapters. But the other side characters seem to lack some substances. But aside from that, I like that the MC is not acting too complacent or lustful like in usual story with cliché tropes. Although he received a very strong skill, he still preferred his peaceful life. I can only say one thing for this kind of MC, "lucky bastard!" Good luck, author! :)
Celestial Bloodline
Fantasy · _Orange_