Moonlit Identity [BL]
4.69 (45 ratings)
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A male vampire (Luan) at night and a female werewolf (Luna) during the day!!! Luan & Luna are the same person.
- One is a rebellious male vampire that is a night creature.
- Another is an enchanting yet vicious female werewolf who comes to life during the day.
Nobody in their faction knows about this hybrid's existence, and it becomes harder for them to keep it a secret with every passing day.
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Well, it all started with a fateful night.
It is a modern world where a powerful and mysterious soul suddenly transmigrates into a very complex existence—that of a male vampire (Luan) at night and a female werewolf (Luna) during the day. This soul does not remember its past and is even more confused about its present.
A present where vampires, werewolves, and sorcerers live together secretly among humans, even though tensions brew pretty high between their factions.
So, to survive and win, he/she needs to keep this dual identity a secret. But it's not easy.
Especially with a handsome man in the picture, who is strangely attracted to both.
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The story has a very sudden start with no definite past of the character. It is only vaguely mentioned that character has transmigrated. We do not know much about his new environment nor the old one. Only that he is a vampire in transition. It is interesting and grows curiosity among readers. All in all, although there are only two chapters right now the story is worth reading.
You know what, I really liked this story, it's something I'm really into and although the beginning might throw you off for a minute, it's like it walks you through it, without just telling you, you go through his new life with him and he brings you along, it's truly spectacular to imagine and view, I don't really have any complaints with anything in the novel, and honestly I really enjoyed it. So in all and all, Awesome book author! And I can't wait for another chapter ✨
OMG can't stop reading I think am getting addicted to this book ...Once I started reading I couldn't get enough of it . Give me more please update ... please
I LOVE this. It is exciting, well paced and makes you want to read more. I love the way this writer describes everything so well. You feel as if you are there.
First of all, I’ll start with the prize, because it’s the best thing I reviewed so far. It’s well written, the story is interesting, and directed in a good, fluid way, which makes this simply a good read. Dialogues are very nice as well. So putting that aside I’ll move to the pointers, as I have a few, but mostly small things. I start with the beginning: I’m not so sold on how you start the novel. As a starting writer with no cloud, you should make sure your first chapter ticks some basics, and you by all means do, but I think It could be done better. So normally you start with a hook, so people will continue reading and you will have the room to sell them the premise of the story, the protagonist, the setting, and all that stuff. For me, the later parts with Luan on the ground dit it better than the falling star-thingy. So yeah, that’s a possible improvement. Then we have some awkward words here and there. Just a few, but they give an off-vibe. Examples: The fourth paragraph of the 1 chapter. „As he tried to get his bearings” - I presume it’s to avoid the repetition of words but ant it as supposed to be something along the lines of „regaining his posture”, but it feels awkward. I would even say that the repetition would be better in this case. Then a bit later you have the ‘Stunningly’ where mister shades kick Luan. That also does feel awkward. I would use surprisingly, or just simply go with a dry kick. There is more, but I’m not gonna point them all. What I’ll point out, on the other hand, are those weird brackets. It feels as if you use them for the protagonist's thoughts, but not always. So, as far as I know „ „ - this is for dialogue, and ‘ ‘ - for thoughts. At least in English. With this, the third paragraph of the second chapter feels really weird. Then the „...” and the lines. I feel like those are useless there. It’s as if you want to jump to a different scene, but we are left each time in the same scene, so why not just simply continue? Then the office and the club. You kinda described them, but also kinda not. It by all means didn’t feel empty, but I also have this hunch that you could do it better. Flesh it out more. Then the 24-year-old girl. You narrate the story as we are following Luan, but this feels like we zoom out and have the narrator tell us some additional info, which makes this feel off as well. I would either just approximate the age and her soberness instead of stating it. Or completely zoom out, and go full narrator style there – but this, I believe will also feel awkward. Then the re-appearance of the redhead (vampire?) and the return of the brackets, which are again like adding the narrator mixed with the protagonist's thoughts? I don’t know. Then, as the dialogue progresses you start telling instead of showing. You tell what the girl is feeling/thinking, and start telling more stuff as the bulky guy comes. It could be shown instead, which would make it much better. Usually, you want to ‘tell’ only the stuff that’s useless for the novel. Like a quick background of a background character, that’s meaningless, and would only interrupt the flow of the plot. Here I think showing would benefit the story. The stuff about delaying could also be shown, for example by Luan getting weaker or feeling some symptoms of whatever is happening to him. There also is the consent thingy. It feels important for the story, but actually, why is there, and why should Luan care about this? It feels more like an irritating addition to the drink blood quest, which I feel the protagonist, who showed his rebellious side already, could consider ignoring. That would be it from me.
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So far the story is quite good, hard to say much as there are only 2 chapters. However it still managed to grip me and I am left wanting more. I've added it to my library!
The story and the plot grabbed my interest from the first chapter. I loved the descriptions of each scene especially the action one. It is very simple to read with catchy dialogues. Luan does have the charm to capture people's attention and here I am eager to see the next chapter. Keep going, author... All the best.
The author has done more than just enough. This book is amazing with a gripping story that hooks you in the first few chapters. The only thing to make it better is to update more often
Great story, the writing style is also good... I found the plot really interesting. Hooked me from the first page...Can't wait to read more!
It's quite an interesting book...I'm a fan of fantasy and especially werewolves..and this book gives all to quench my thirst. It's filled with some amazing scenes and the writing quality is awesome. I would like to follow its lead.
Alright, what did I just read 😂😂.. Men!, it feels like am actually there in the book, what kind of magic is this, author 😂😂.. Oh God, am totally loving this book right now. Author just update, update, update, alright..
I really like the world design. It feels dark and creepy, yet realistic. The pacing is extremely well designed and the world building as well, as mentioned before. This is an extremely engaging story and I recommend everyone to check it out. I will definitely continue to read it.
I must say that this is a very good book. I think I'm already in love with the characters.
Great read! Requires a little transition at first but a very good read overall
I am hooked. The starting, the characters, and the background setting plus the plot follow up are so awesome. I love it already. The MC is the one who got me on edge waiting for his next act. I love it.
The concept was unique to me and was very original. Like a dual personality of a female and male in one body. Also liked the execution of such a difficult idea. This is pretty much to my liking! Kudos and a job well done. [img=strong][img=update]
Hmmm, it's a good story, but if you could make the MC motives clearer, I could get immersed more in the story. Keep up the good work, Author!
It captures the reader's attention and never lets go. Once your curiosity is satisfied then new questions arise... once those are answered then there's another. The story starts by stirring up some emotions and once you are hooked in there's no way out. I author's way of describing the feelings, atmosphere, and settings is smooth and fresh. The writing style and grammar is clean, and the plot and world bg develop as we learn more about the MC and his current state. It's binge-worthy. We need more chapters...
The writing of the characters is good, the only mistake I've seen is that some commas are written when they shouldn't be there, and sometimes there is something wrong with the sentences, a single word or so. it was good since the name you used in the characters isn't randomized and there's also a background within the name like Samuel who became Lucifer but that's just in the show Since in the bible, it wasn't stated he became Lucifer but the description that you showed about him is good since Lucifer is known for being prideful There was sometimes no description of where they are but it's still good.
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