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yes, will update. I'm just planning his next life.
ch 12 Foundation Establishment Pill
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
no
[Ding! The host can obtain points by increasing his cultivation level in each reincarnation. The host can also complete certain achievements to gain extra points. The points will be added to the host's account after the host's death in each reincarnation.]
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
ye
ch 12 Foundation Establishment Pill
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
idk if u said that bcs he will start a harem, because no, he won't start a harem. he is just joking with her. which part do you think made the mc annoying and a regular character? i want to make the mc more unique, and i want to know how i can improve him.
ch 12 Foundation Establishment Pill
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
alright, i will write it how you said. i wanted to make it funnier. also, mc was sarcastic here. it seems that i didn't make it so obvious. i just wanted this dialogue to be funny
Xiao Ye grinned wickedly as he looked at Yao Xia. He scanned her breasts and her beautiful face and said arrogantly, "You slut! In front of heaven and earth, I swear that I will make you part of my harem."
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
not really
For individuals like Xiao Ye, a psychopath, blood relations merely offer a sense of trust, one that others may extend to him.
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
I'm glad you liked this part of the novel. Well, the main character will create his own techniques quite often.
ch 0 9 Hong Lianhua Devouring Technique
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
did you perhaps like the previous book more?
ch 10 Golden Light Sect Disciples
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
I don't think I will. I will probably drop that one, since this one seems more promising. I don't like how the first chapter was in this book, but now, I started to enjoy writing this book. As for the other, it will take significantly more effort to write, it is beyond my capability to try to develop Xiao Ye from an average guy to someone cold and ruthless.
ch 10 Golden Light Sect Disciples
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
yes. if you don't like the main character dying multiple times, then this novel is not for you. he will die a lot of times.
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Hey! Thank you for reading my new novel. I want to know what are your thoughts? Is it better than the previous one? I know that the first chapter of this novel was really bad, but overall, is this novel better than the previous?
ch 10 Golden Light Sect Disciples
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
the system is only usable after he dies.
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alright, i will rewrite it.
ch 0 1 Infinite Rebirth System
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
will update. dont worry, not dropped
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fixed
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original
ch 0 2 Li Zhenyu
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
ye, even though 'living things' seems a little bit more demeaning, but creatures sounds cooler.
[A/N: Yes, I wrote 'living things' intentionally. I want to make it clear that Xiao Ye views human life as nothing.]
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
"a bit"
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yes, you are right. i was a little bit afraid to make them say such things, since she's 15 and they are middle aged men. at first, i wanted to make them say such things, but upon further thought, i decided against.
Li Zhenyu and Zhang Hu walked away, laughing and mocking them. They left Liu Lan and Xiao Ye lying on the ground, bleeding and bruised.
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Eastern · Hidden_Moon
ty. i am glad you like it
ch 13 Profound Spirit Sect
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