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Oh Don't worry about that.. I made him shrew but as you know he is just someone who is struggling for his survival even which he barely holds on based and lived a frugal lifestyle so first I want to solve it and then adding the human nature, the sin of greed that makes someone wants more and more to make him darker, sinister and ambitious person
So tell me guys should I revise the chapters and edit them to increase the quality and sort out a few things reuploading the novel?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
I planned on making a detailed explanation at first but after a while I let it go.. see what I want to make is a pretty you know unique in my opinion since I haven't ever heard of power system like this and don't want to inform dump it all.. see unlike some traditional systems like cultivation and all I had planned a slightly different system so if I have to explain it would be all info dump which I like many other readers hate to read.. The most I can do for being clear is to slowly reveal the complex system and invest more on plots more than info dump copying from the likes of versatile mage and bit other type of writing but as you said to make plot more interesting I think I should reveal the system first to make readers more invested in a new system
So tell me guys should I revise the chapters and edit them to increase the quality and sort out a few things reuploading the novel?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Yup
ch 12 Did You Pray Today?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
*don't our mc would use regressors to his advantage making use of the regressor's knowledge and possible advantage the regressor has to offer.
ch 12 Did You Pray Today?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Hmm you might be confused with how I am suddenly portraying the regressor in a good light ain't you? See first of all it won't be something like regressor and mc being friends so if you are worried about that rest assured.. The regressor is someone focused on fighting reaver and I want him to take the lead to introduce mc to Reavers see I have read a lot of novels where there are just two things one that mc and protagoinist becomes friends which I do t like at all or they become enemy where regressor is portrayed as foolish which also goes to extreme. see I don't want to just go around and stepping down on logic and degrade regressor unnecessarily just because he isn't mc. They won't be friends nor would be enemies but would fight for a common goal where the regressor would introduce mc to the threats that are unknown to him as the regressor continues on with his cliche plots.
ch 12 Did You Pray Today?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Nah I have a better plan
ch 11 Regressor Or A Pedophile?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Yeah it was just annoying and unreal, the protagonist acted like an omniscient being and doing just a few things they gain the unbreakable loyalty of their targets while making promises they can't fulfill at all in their current state
ch 11 Regressor Or A Pedophile?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Yeah
ch 11 Regressor Or A Pedophile?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Well thank you for pointing this out.. from now on I would be careful to not repeat the same explanation repeatedly
Magic is a stat everyone throughout this world possesses, granting them the ability to perform powerful magic. Still, because Yuuya isn't from this world, he doesn't have any magic circuit that one is born within this world, enabling them to use magic, which unfortunately Yuuya doesn't possess at all.
In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
I am kind of new in this writing so yeah that happens when I want give clear explanation
Magic is a stat everyone throughout this world possesses, granting them the ability to perform powerful magic. Still, because Yuuya isn't from this world, he doesn't have any magic circuit that one is born within this world, enabling them to use magic, which unfortunately Yuuya doesn't possess at all.
In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
Nah that too would be balance breaking and there won't be anything for him to search talents for I'd that happened and not for me to write plots
I said I won't be releasing any chapters, but anyway, here is the new chapter. I hope you enjoy it. Oh, and by the way, I want to inform you all Yuuya won't have any innate curse technique of his own. You know how broken Yuuya's character is, being able to master anything and copy any technique or move he sees once, with so much growth potential. I don't want to give him any innate technique, as it would mean granting him a single technique to focus on, which doesn't suit Yuuya's abilities. So, I want him to learn more by observing others and create his own OP techniques.
In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
Nah even in the end he wasn't in my opinion.. yeah it was shown that he is pretty powerful but his powers were always you know inconsistent so I just went with this and you have seen Toji during Shibuya do you think he was near him?
Everyone knows how strong that monster really is, so Yuuya also is well aware that it would take a lot of time and hard work for him to catch up to the likes of Toji.
In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
Hey it's not that I didn't thought about it but I guess you just have to check out the system .. you can scroll and check the previous chapters to know more about the system or through net then you might understand what I mean the original author of Igca didn't put much thought in my opinion on the system and just made it a whole mess so I can't just show those absurd stats can I and degrade the logic,
{A/N: I ain't showing status and skills now; you already know, but the novel's status and skills accumulation are a total mess and completely unreal, which I can't keep up with. So yeah, I won't bother with it now, but yeah, I will compare MC's growth with other characters just to give you a rough idea.}
In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
Hey I mentioned it, that he has been practicing martial arts and no he would never show his house to others and all so don't worry
ch 22 Annoying Visitors
In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
Ahem that's you know certainly balance breaker.. see I want to make an op protagonist novel but don't want to break the balance. I kind of get the idea you are giving but I certainly can't do that.. the power you saying is something that's too op and there won't be anything much challenging to him not to mention the story would become bland, don't you think so I am sorry but I can't provide him with that.
ch 0 8 Serpentile Renewal
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Well manhwa, manga novels.. but really if you just look at the number of novels and manhwas there are which follow the same setting you might also find these things cliche and overused.. this is one of the plots that are what I think super predictable but yeah I have already changed the names and abilities so yeah there is really no relation of that manhwa with this
The screen floated on top of the three boys, instantly giving away their identities to Ian, who was having a hard time recognizing them.
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
you know that's the rough overview of the majority of novels
The screen floated on top of the three boys, instantly giving away their identities to Ian, who was having a hard time recognizing them.
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
So tell me guys should I revise the chapters and edit them to increase the quality and sort out a few things reuploading the novel?
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454