I see 馃槄馃槄
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I guess my second chapter has that...
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I plan to still edit my chapters so if I see its pointless I'll scrap it
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It'll be revealed in future chapters just keep reading and you'll find out
He said the last word looking deeply into her yellow eyes before placing his hand back in his pocket and walking towards his room. He remembered how close they were when he first came here and recently, the distance between them just kept increasing.
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Yep but they were acting tough kinda 馃槀馃槀
Alistar soon turned to look at the saddened kids behind him. Some had reddened eyes, others could be seen with a sorrowful expression, while a few straight out balled their eyes out.
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I'll edit it now And thanks
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She's the curious type so she'd keep pestering him and also to make it more interesting
Easily changing the subject, Alistar didn't give Sylvia a chance to reply before he began walking. Knowing that she would keep pestering him until she got answers, Alistar began thinking of what to tell her.
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I guess I'll do that And thanks
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The first question I'll say you take it that way... 馃槓 As for the second, i doubt he was sus
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That's right, he deemed all Ascenders as unlucky individuals. Having power is fun and all but when it comes with responsibilities it becomes a chore. Considering the responsibility that came with becoming an Ascender, Alistar would rather lose his family name than become one.
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Thanks again I'll keep ur wise words to heart
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Thanks
He had short messy white hair that stuck to his moist skin, clear blue eyes that would look like a mirror if anyone kept gazing into them, and a face that would make women of all ages acknowledge his existence.
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Thanks for the review bro
Thanks bro
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Sharp bro Also check out my latest book
He had short messy white hair that stuck to his moist skin, clear blue eyes that would look like a mirror if anyone kept gazing into them, and a face that would make women of all ages acknowledge his existence.
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Thanks for the honest review. I'll try to get better but I never expected someone of ur caliber to bother reading the Novel of a newbie 馃槄
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馃樁馃樁 I guess I'll also edit that
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I guess I'll be editing it then...
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He was joking 馃槄馃槄
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I have no problem with it 馃槄
I Can Perfect All Things
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