Not a trained writer. solo work and writing is just a hobby.
2024-01-14 Joined Global
perhaps Raphael is also reincarnated, wouldn't be strange if he is lol
For the rest of the affinity tests no one got as good results as Raphael got.Some got better then Ren but most were around Rens level except for one.That one was a girl by the name of Ruth who was friends with Raphael and Ren.She had 10000 mana and a high affinity for mana.Ren knew that both of her parents were mages so it made sense for her to have a lot of mana.Raphael didn't have any parents who were mages as far as Ren knew so it was confusing for him.Why did Raphael have so much mana then?He was the same as Ren who didn't have any mages as parents.
Fantasy · admiralblast32
The story is alright so far and I don't wanna be that guy but a space after "." would be nice.I don't really mind the other errors like spelling and stuff but would also be nice if you take some time editing and cleaning.
ch 0 2 Early education and training
Fantasy · admiralblast32
The world was too cringe and God had to spawn some abomination to wipe out the cringe lol
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Fantasy · admiralblast32
whew some error here
I respawn endlessly but that's basically it
Fantasy · admiralblast32