He does and it definitely becomes more obvious in the chapters.
"I know who is responsible for the poison," Akari announced, barely letting his colleague finish her sentence. She didn't seem surprised, just rolled her eyes and left.
Fantasy · Llelo
Hmmm, that's a good point. I will add it to my editing notes!!
"Do you think he was the Bandri Emmy saw?" Eirian wondered. It made a terrible kind of sense. With his face unknown, Fox could have as many as he wanted inside the walls of the Camelia.
Fantasy · Llelo
Had some family health problems, unfortunately, but there were some good parts! How is your writing going?
Maybe that was the task Death had been hinting about, stopping two idiots from putting on their own nooses.
Fantasy · Llelo
Yep!
Beng Shai's sister, Beng Shen, as she'd finally introduced herself during the flight, was carrying two small children and their pet kitten, separated from their parents in the panic from the same village. "I'm going to ride ahead and see if I can find them." She said and didn't bother waiting for a response before she did so. She was the de facto leader of the Bandri, now they'd realized and didn't seem pleased about it, but she was even less pleased about the betrayal from Song and Snow and had promised a legacy of bloody revenge that had left Chenzhou and Mingzhe wide-eyed.
Fantasy · Llelo
The only reason mingzhe isn’t helping is because of the way I created the defender is that they have to solve it on their own. They are the only one that can which is what earns them their path home.
The part of Eirian that was always ready to fight screamed 'no' as loud as it could, but it was slowly being suffocated by the heat and weight of the fire, now so strong and bright that it looked like midday at midnight.
Fantasy · Llelo
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😫
Maybe…maybe the answer lay in not stopping the fire at all?
Fantasy · Llelo
So true
Humans were terribly strange about marks, and Death wasn't sure where it had come from. None of his children had carried any or cared about them when they left the world of the dead for the world of the living. That they're descendants would care so much was an anomaly that he wasn't sure he liked.
Fantasy · Llelo
I firmly believe that no one truly learns from the mistakes of others, they only learn from their own
They're descendants have all inherited that trait from him. No one looks to Death for guidance; they barely look to their own parents, preferring to suffer their own path instead of accepting the guidance from those who have already made the journey.
Fantasy · Llelo
He doesn’t understand genetics
Somehow, he made his children incredibly stubborn, and it was absolutely not on purpose.
Fantasy · Llelo
They are doing much better! Ahh, that got me too! And I think you were the one who caught it! I've been building an encyclopedia to go with the story. I get weird about the plot more than the descriptions, and usually I have a ton of notes of things to go back and add to scenes (mostly descriptions) when I go back to do edits. I can't edit seriously while I'm writing because I stop writing and get stuck on editing. 😩 But I'm very glad to hear you're making progress!! Getting started was the hardest part for me.
Maybe that was the task Death had been hinting about, stopping two idiots from putting on their own nooses.
Moonfire & Midnight
Fantasy · Llelo