To Morrow 😅
The next day.
HxH: Dying Makes Me Stronger
Anime & Comics · AstartesTL
Should be 2.5, right? Dont think cassian transmigrated/started teaching earlier than this, or i mixed something up
Cassian shrugged. "Four and a half years with you does that."
Harry Potter and the Surprisingly Competent History of Magic Professor
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
ro dah!
Fuuuuuuu~~~ Ssssssss~~
Hogwarts: This Dark Lord is Good?
Book&Literature · Captain69
I don't remember we had a system inventory introduced? I thought he bought a backpack or something to hold the stuff
Determined to tackle these challenges in the physical world, Harry reached into his system inventory, retrieving his cauldron and the necessary ingredients for the Cure for Boils potion. He carefully set up his workstation, organizing the ingredients: Nettle Leaves, Dittany, Snake Fangs, Porcupine Quills, Horned Slugs and Flobberworm Mucus.
Harry Potter with Technology System[Completed]
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
Awesome work, loved it. Thanks for writing for so long! For those curious, there are many grammar mistakes, but it's nothing unbearable. Would love if you got someone to proofread and fix it. Characters are really nice and fleshed out, and the story is great! Towards the end it was a bit drawn out, but nothing can really decrease my opinion about it. Good job!
Pretty fun, keep up the good work! You do make some mistakes such as somewordsnothavingspaces, and some minor grammar mistakes - which mean nothing imho. Plot-wise, character-wise and any-other-wise it's awesome. Thanks!
Bro you really have a knack for writing comic scenes, whole thing up till now was awesome. You only need to get a PR at this point for small grammar mistakes, otherwise it's perfect. Keep up the good work!
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Honestly it's good that you got rid of it, but instead of Grindelwald, you could've made some fate-like encounter with a god or sth, maybe death not liking the weapon itself. Grindelwald, while stronger for sure, still shouldn't have come close to stopping this. I think you're massively raising power levels for both dumbs and grinder if you leave it like this?
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Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
These are the facts from previous paragraphs: -He has a twin brother. -He can't remember his brother's face. -He has an older brother and a little brother. -He has a good memory and can remember something like 1 yr 2 mnth 1 wk 3 days. (Quite a few contradictions in paragraphs above author bro, maybe take a look, but dw I'll keep going) And of course fire nation attacks. <3
"What can I say? A cornered rat, as they say," I left the sentence unfinished, knowing they would understand as they had heard me say it before. "In short, that's it. Now, back to the point... When my older brother and I were fourteen, some kid caught us practicing. He was quite young, only about ten or eleven. It's funny that everything that happened next started with him. He was the son of a trader who had stopped in our village for some rest. My brother and mom didn't pay much attention to it, and neither did I, but I have a good memory, as I've mentioned before. The trader left the village the next day, and three days later, soldiers from the Fire Nation arrived in the village. They were looking for water and earthbenders. Our parents and all the villagers refused to cooperate, but the soldiers didn't wait. Moreover, they had a firebender with them..."
Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
I've re-read this a few days ago. You really did a great job, you got lots of talent. Thanks for writing!
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex