中断 Tempest [Realistic DxD] 中断

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amaturewriter

Most DXD FF's are stupid ...they are all interesting but ****ty CD, and slutty chicks and a man slut MC ruin it [AUTHOR AVOID THIS].... here though,,god damn, it pretty intersecting,,,SI MC with a really cool and interesting power, and he plans, he plans damn it...plus this story seems to not look at DXD as an anime, nice....look at it realistic ...[but not too dark like 'I am MR 5'-that stories nice, but lets not go that deep]...and this starts out in USA,,,a new land,,cool, author might make up his own BS lore and ****...its very nice -Use MC's SI intelligence, use other worlds anime knowledge for advantage..[Lightening armour, 8 gates, create an ability similar to gudodama using the scared gears bubbles. the sussano, Kamui, Neteros ability, hado 90 and 99 [aizens ability's].....tailed beast bomb?, Rasen ringu [ Naruto reverse, menma uzumaki ability]..ursus shock..]...Light ability of Kizaru,,,the time bubbels of magic king from black clover?.... -[A spell that takes enemies sight and senses away?.. think of it, not OP but very OP] -Make MC smart, plan, shows plans, dont make him a generic retard. --Relationships,,,show build and take it slow [u get more chps too]...dont make the generic useless chick, only serving as MC sex toy, give em character, and make em help MC and u know be loyal and ****. [also, pls no moms and wives- Reason, no FF author can spend time building and showing a proper build..so yah...and its weird...just make em OC.] Harem [its dxd so I wont say ****,.. just dont make it massive]... Parings: Valire tepes?, Lavina Reni, an OC like irene belerison [from FT...she could be half dragon, half human who was abaondended?]. GL, truly interesting, just dont fk it up :) **: Author, love the weird language **** u do when monsters, etc speak but I cant read it, kinda hard, so could u write translation in brackets, close to it, ]

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High_Ground

Interesting idea but please if you make a harem limit it at 2 or maybe 3 people so they aren’t neglected and forgotten and make them actually useful not just some s l u t that he can use to release his stress...

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1Dreamer_Owl

From Spanish to English How horrible it is to know that you find a DxD novel with realistic settings with and with the potential to be a very good novel and you start reading it and then you realize that you have already read all published chapter... !Σ(ﾟД ﾟ) - This novel deserves its five stars only with the small number of chapters for now and the incredible genius of the author when making a novel like this, I always believed that the DxD universe shown by the novel and anime (especially anime) were not "dark" enough as it should be due to the theme of the factions and their respective mythologies and gods but this novel shows you the other side of the coin which the novel and the anime do not tell you ... With the last thing to add ... Keep up the good Author work and I want more chapters! TwT Owl out 7u7

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Bear_Mint

I love it. The idea of a DxD story that actually tries to make the whole 'all supernatural is real' be real. The author promised no anime logic and so far I haven't seen it. However, there is currently a lot of time skips and that makes the MC's progression feel forced. Maybe a time skip after a major series of events, but as of now, the MC is in the training arc.

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NEETsemsalvasao

yes it's me "Dio"! rejoice because I "Dio" am interested to read this story so I "Dio" order me to inform me what is the alignment of the MC and if Issei dies? wryyy !!! now where did i put my steamroller ???

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FuckY0u

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Wolfboy123r

dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont ever drop dont drop 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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Roon_Toon1

add the harem tag because no dxd fanfic doesn't have a harem I will delete this review after you add the harem tag because i have stated no dxd doesn't have a harem.

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FuckY0u

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Sanjeed_Faruque

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PhoenixKnight

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Nur_Ahmad_Gifari

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MahoV

I must say that it is one if not the greatest fanfiction I ever read it feel so real that it's just like looking at a movie , I can just say amazing! ......................

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Frank_The_Fuctard

The concept is super cool, a realistic au of high dxd. The story development is a bit forced at times (in my opinion) espically at the start, but this is a minor annoyance as the rest of the story is great. ■|{\♤|■|■●■●■●■●■●♡●}|♤{\}♡\¡●{|}|♤♤●}\♡|}\◇●♤●8●♡●¡●{¡|}▪︎◇\{♤\♤○}♡|¡|{|♤|

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GeM_BlonkZ

Not yet reading it but looking at the review all of it give 5 or 4 star hope this gonna be good. ..........................................

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jazebelle

Best dxd fanfic I ever read......... Also pls don't drop author I really like this one, also crea a patreon dude so I can motivate u a little bit ehhehheheheheheheheheh