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Check out my other novel, Secrets of the Universe. It's the same storyline but was just revised
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Very nice! Please provide more explanation to some of the terms, sometimes I feel confused as to what's happening. I haven't read stories with cultivation systems in a long while so this was nice! I saw that some of the sentences lacked appropriate punctuations, which isn't too bothersome but can be fixed. All in all, Jake is a madlad..!! Keep going, author ^^
Giving this a five star. I really enjoy this book and am expecting more to come. Now I just need to hit the required amount of words to finish up this review. I will update it as the book continues on.
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I'm so glad l stumbled upon this book. I have never read anything like it. I love how dedicated you are to your craft. You update regularly feeding our curious minds. I don't always understand the terms you use but nonetheless your book is amazing. You have a lot of potential and l can't wait to see how your book progresses.
such a great and amazing novel. sincerely, it has a lot of potential and I recommend it as a good read. Author really tried in making the storyline not to look like some shit novels
Placing an overpowered character into the fray is a bold move for fantasy novels. However, this story has a way to make such a character to a relatable one. The detailed explanation of the process on how Jake became incredibly strong is enough to convey understanding of what it's like to be on the powerful side of things. Reading this book will surely erase the stigma of the "OP Protagonist". Hey, I can almost hear the song, "Superman", by Five for Fighting. Fantastic job, author! I'll be keeping an eye on Jake's ever progressing story [img=recommend]
I have to say just by reading the first chapter you can tell author seems dedicated to what he is doing and adding enough details as he can to the story and i really like that. Even though there were some words i didnt know i still find the story interesting, keep it up! :)
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Now this is a very interesting plot...I recommend this to read as it's got solid plot progression....Keep it up and greater job [img=recommend]
For starters, the world building is remarkable. I feel like I'm reading SAO. There's quite a few words that I have to search up though since english is not my first language. But this is really good!
I liked it. Update stability is good. world background. character descriptions and development are very good too. There're some minor grammar mistakes it would be perfect after revising. I'll follow this, thanks.
I was so intirged by the prologue and the rest didn't disappoint. The character development is awsome keep on writing and don't stop.:)).
wow,this is beautiful , honestly,I love this book, the grammar was good ,the plot is beautiful and it's a really interesting book ,I highly recommend
Hi, I'm the author. I'm just gonna shamelessly rate this book above 4.5 stars. If you are looking for an overpowered MC that you can connect to, this is the book for you. Also, feel free to comment about your thoughts on each chapter.