(One-shot)

LV 4

rashixo

Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.

LV 4

sophia_121

Plot is unique and interesting.. can't say anything about grammar as you know mine😂😂😂 I like this novel and will recommend it to others.. Best of luck👍

LV 3

minho_Shiny

I liked the synopsis and can't wait to read what happens later. I wish the unborn child and she can be safe after giving birth. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.

Although I find it difficult to give a review when only two chapters are available at the moment, I have done my best to give my first expression of the story. I realise this review may appear rather negative, but I hoped to give you honest feedback rather than nonsensical praise in order for you to grow. Your sentence structure and grammar is very poor. To start off, you often write in the past tense and present tense in the same sentence. Additionally, you often forget to capitalise at the start of a sentence, there are a lot of unnecessary commas and odd word choices, and sometimes there are punctuation marks missing. The plot seems rushed. As a reader, I am dropped into a fast-paced story from chapter one before I even get a chance to get an idea of the characters. Consequently, it is hard to get invested in what is happening to them. I do hope you don’t get dissuaded by my harsh words and wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.