RPG System In Cultivation World

I had high hopes but had even higher disappointment. Writing Quality: There are frequent spelling mistakes and horrible plot twists that make it hard to follow. A few examples will be listed below. (-) MC nearly kills a guy because they were in a duel and his Tiger Palm or whatever leveled up mid-fight, causing the huge gap to grow even higher between the two. Not only does the antagonist/cannon fodder NOT die, he gets MC’s first girl too! After that, the MC gets blamed for purposely injuring when as he said, “He was just too weak.” (-) MC finds out that his senior sister on his peak is being married off to a person who she doesn’t want to marry. Suddenly, the MC cultivates really quickly and duels the bad guy. Things aren’t done just yet! The bad guy’s family is actually the owner of the sect he’s in! Just when we think the MC is boutta get hulk smashed by the sect master, MC’s friend is actually from a royal family! (-) MC gets the girl and goes off to his friend’s mansion in rich family land to meet friend’s family. When they arrive they meet his grandma and he runs off to go get his father. HOWEVER, the grandma is actually not okay with MC being her grandson’s friend and tries to kill him. (Did I mention his second girlfriend who he spent so long (3 chapters) to win over died because of the guards...) I think you can see where this is going.... Story Development: It says the MC is cultivating and his cultivating manuals have gone up in grade, but sometimes it feels like the MC is super slow one minute, and then super fast the next! Just like I said before, it’s super hard to keep up with the story. Character Design: Here are another few examples of bad character design in this story. (first girlfriend) - She fell in love with the MC but then she left him for the person they were getting antagonized by. It’s a complete 180o on her character!! (MC’s friend’s grandma) She tried to kill MC but failed to realize the obvious flaw in her plan: MC’s friend would get suspicious and would hate his grandma once he found out MC was dead. Do these characters have brains the size of peanuts? World Background: I find it highly unlikely that sects in the continent would let the royal families control their spots. Hey, I HIGHLY HIGHLY doubt that the royal families would just be in peace with each other. So I gave this category a 3-star for some realism, but not enough.

IN A NUT: As always MC gets reincarnated in a body of a trash and "mysteriously" gets a system which makes him stronger but go dark[like venom from spiderman]... Since the MC was an otaku and since his "new-trash-body" has no memories on communication skills, he eventually looses his only existing friend too... WARNING: (a)not for under 17 and possibly not for the weak (b)chapter count and release rate too low, so can't be completely judged yet...

So basically the story went south so quickly after chapter 17 that I don't recommend this to anyone. The mc first was portrayed as a cool thinker but after that only made me cringe. If you want to read go ahead but I only will give this 5 more chapters and after that, if it stills doesn't change I will drop it and I think I'm not the only one.good job author

This is purely a novel you read when you've got nothing better to do. From over-used clichés to unnecessary or lacking information, you really have to turn your brain off for this. Be prepared for ONLY RPG based cultivation. No resources, no mysterious backer or support from any sects or clans. The story could be easily rewritten to be much higher quality, as much as there's 50+ chapters in there's really no depth to the novel.

I'm giving this novel a bad review mainly because the mc killed the brother of the person who saved his life. Good payback right? I mean he could have searched for another sect, that would be so nice, well it's too late. His brother saved his life. HIS FUCKING LIFE I honestly don't think the author knows what we want. I mean wtf? Does he think that is cool or what? But that's not the only reason why I'm giving this novel 1,8 stars. He is doing throughout the story a lot of wrong decisions. There are also some mistakes, like he forgot that he learned a technique that gives him 3 skill points per level up. There are also a lot of times where the mc is ultra strong, but then suddenly he is weak -> Bad writing I'm still going to read it even though it is possible that there are more bad decisions the author could have prepared for us. I will take the risk. Finally there are two possibilities: The author learns what the readers want. I mean yeah. Everyone has different tastes but don't change the kind of story it is dramatically within the story. Second Possibility: If you don't want to.understand your readers and gain more experience then just idk, I think you are doing it as a hobby, so you have a lot of potential to improve yourself by checking the user reaction and so on. Generally speaking the story is good but there are those details like killing for no reason that I don't like. A lot of details that I don't like

The MC is just a beta male with no real ball and 10 IQ loser even gamers has 70+ IQ but this guy is just so stupid.🤔................................... .......................... .......................... ........................... ....................... .......................