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Only 17+ are allowed. Read at your own risk.
Mature and sexual scenes are included.
Aurielle Reddens, the rightful heiress of Reddens incorporations, loses her parents at the age of 7, unaware of the true cause of their demise.
She shuts love out of her life in fear of being hurt.
However the new guy in her class keeps getting close to her for some reason.
Will she be able to break down her walls and fall in love.
Cam she take her rightful position as the heiress in a den full of lions waiting to tear her apart?
This is my very first novel and I know it might be imperfect but please support and enjoy the story.
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Even though this story has only about 5 chapters it has already captured my interest.The synopsis alone captured my attention and the first chapter was really interesting. The author has a very interesting idea wile writing this book. The amount of creativity in the book was perfect and the language and pronunciation was on spot. keep up the great work
The story is still in its early stages but I know it's going to be big. It advances interestingly. I would like to suggest that you use "...." for dialogues. It would be easier to read. Overall the story seems really great! Keep up the great work author!
Loved it ,story and writing style is great and loved it so far. Looking forward for more, Keep it up author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Of all the elements of the story, the writing style was the best... why? cause it makes u feel like u r watching a series rather than reading a fine online book. This book is great and easily flowing. Good job, author
though this story has only about 5 chapters I'm very intrigued by it. The synopsis alone made me want to dive into this book and the first chapter was really interesting. language and pronunciation had no problems at all! keep up!
Your writing style is absolutely wonderful! It feels so natural and easy to read. I love how fast-paced it is; it keeps me engaged, and I never get bored in any of the chapters. While there may be some small punctuation errors, it's still a joy diving into your story.
Right off the bat, the FL is utterly hilarious 🤣 I honestly couldn't stop laughing after reading the first chapter! The plot seems interesting and a few improvements in punctuation and grammar could make this book pretty hard to put down ^.^ Great job Author ( •̀ ω •́ )✧
4.6 for me, Sorry I'm not the romantic type of guy so I'll say it from a single person point of view (sad single life) The story is interesting, thou a little faced paced, the characters and well written and the setting in great, the dialogue sometime overlap and there are some grammatical mistakes which we all make (Especially me as English is not my first language) But there is improvement as the story progresses, so keep going and one more thing, the chapters are too short, lol. People need sauce so don't deny them of this privilege.
The story is great and all and I also liked the way you used English so clearly , honestly the way of you utilizing English makes me jealous because I am not good at that .The story was too short , this is only my opinion but if the chapter 1 - 4 had been a single chapter since they takes place in class , the chapter would not only be long enough for the readers to be engrossed but also had been a complete episode .I want to write many things but I won't . if you don't mind me then can you send me your Facebook account or something like that where I can talk to you in private chat or something like that ?after all , getting to know another author is extremely advantageous to an author like us .I will be waiting for your id account , I hope you will send it to me .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Heys guys i'm being forced to review here haha, joke aside. The plot good for me, although i'm not into romance genre, i still find it entertaining. The grammar is good and the curent development of the characters are ok. Wish your book luck!
the story is interesting and a little faced paced, the characters and well written and the setting in great, the dialogue sometime overlap but I noticed that they improve later overall keep it up and good luck
Quite an interesting story. I feel there's a lot of potential in the plot however grammar made it a little hard to read. Dialogue was also a bit of a mess and it was difficult to know who was talking and what they were saying. Descriptions were mostly okay as were the characters. The only thing was when one of the mc's classmates were describing her, she sounded a little like a Mary Sue. Not sure if this is the authors intentions but if it is hopefully the story will be done nicely. Otherwise great job author. You have a great story here that with a little work could be a masterpiece.
As I previously said that the book is great , I want to prize the author for the good writing style that is easy to understand and catchy. Great job so far ! We want more !
I really love this story! There’s even a side couple to support! I will definitely be coming back to this! Looking forward to the next chapters! Keep up the great work Author! 💪
Love your writing style and the plot is amazing! This work has great potential according to me and I can't wait to read more! Please continue and keep up the good work Author!
Hey there! Here are a few notes that I made while reading your story: 1.) I think your story has a lot of potential! But in order to attract more readers, I suggest changing the sentence structure of the synopsis a bit like: "Lauren, no..." She whispers. "You don't want this, baby"? "I do, but we are in school". ... and so forth. 2. Second, I LOVE your book cover. Obviously, that's Aurielle, am I right? It gave a good impression to me so I wanted to read it more! 3. Third, I noticed that the dialogues between the characters ended up merging over time. Lorena's dialogue with Mr. Maritn wasn't appropriately separated (if I'm not mistaken this is specifically in Chapter 4) and there were other numerous cases as the story progressed. 4. This bothered me so much: Why did Mr. Martin call Aurielle a "goddess"? This is borderline sexual harassment from a teacher T^T Overall, I believe there are a lot of space for improvement! As long as you work hard to correct them and make sure it doesn't repeat itself, you'll be able to create quality work! I hope this review doesn't offend you and that you take it as a form of encouragement in your journey as a writer. Let's be better writers together!
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Good pacing and premise, with solid writing to back it up. Though the chapters are pretty short, the author tells you what you need to know. Only nitpick is sometimes the dialogue comes off as unorganic lots of potential though for growth as it’s only the early chapers
Nice going, I love the descriptions and narrations. Also the story is engaging. Grammar wise, you passed. It was a good novel nonetheless [img=recommend]
I love your writing style, its easy to read and enjoyable. As for the plot, the story still in beginning stage so its difficult to give honest review but I think the potential is there. The pacing is good as well!