In dragonball world as a loli

LV 10

Ototsu_Yume

Whilst there is only one chapter with content currently released I find myself very intrigued as to how the story will progress and it has already grabbed my attention as the characters portrayed so far make for very entertaining interactions. My only nitpicks are the lack of spacing which is a minor issue as the grammar is impeccable and the infrequent updates. (One chapter in 17 posts and not updated for two months so I'm hoping this hasn't been dropped before it has begun, as it truly does have some quite a bit of potential from the author.)

LV 4

Luis_Antiquera

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LV 4

ShadowFlux1909

This story's author uses no spacing and there are words that shouldn't be strung together make it look like incoherent garbage 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LV 4

JustAReader3

99.3 percent bio 0.7 percent way too short and also the author seems to be drop the novel well too much preparation than the actual story like out of 15 chapters there's actually only chapter 1 the author literally hurry world building and end up getting stuck on how to start the story

LV 15

AbyssalSovereign

good .......................................................................................................................................