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What if Momonga and the Great Tomb of Nazarick didn't arrive in the New World as previously known?
What if... Someone else emerged that day?
Jack Graham is an ArchMirage, a powerful magic heteromorphic beast capable of altering his appearance into that of a large mount-sized draconic creature with Deep Amethyst scales. He's a World Champion and the leader of the Blue Citadel, a top PvP-RPG Heteromorphic Guild in the game of YGGDRASIL. They were known to be in control of the underground City of Vilisyrteria during the last days of the game.
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really did a great job in recreating the story while still keeping the multiple personalities of npcs that make the original overlord interesting alongside their interaction in the otherworld
Don't overload yourself now Mr Overlord. Doing 2 Overlord and an Original at one time. Oi... Author-san, you are getting tired, aren't you? haha. So far the story has great promise. Grammar is great, very readable. The quality is high, details are stellar, and current stability is within established parameters. Story development is steady paced and you're using a variation of the Rescuer Romance trope, doing good... Looking forward to that tag you have up there. *winkwink* [ Reposted, Reading Status didn't update. ]
already interested suggestion....no other players from yggdrasil other than lala...not even ains...[many characters become boring]..lala because I want romance and fluff..if harem..max 5..Godlike MC..world travel.. anyway goodluck.
God realy ??? this mc question his servants ob they have time vor him realy man. Mc servants Design ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ story bul**** realy i cant any more . Mc charakter...๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Keep sending me links Author-sama! Your stories are interesting, I just wish you were scatterbrained and jumping from idea to idea. That's beside the point, this review is not on you, but your current work. I love it. Gimme more, but not too much. I still want to read the Darkening of the romances in the other books! Dark Fantasy ftw!
Overall, one of the best read i had on this site, so sad that you dropped it ;( Like really ! so much potentiall ! and you just cut a the best part... Please continue to work on it !
Author tbh this fanfic is way way worse than your 'Overlord-Seraphim' one. It's also quite lame how the MC is predicting something like "We'll make contact if that village is attacked" or "Maybe they're finding a needle in a haystack." MC had no basis for these kind of predictions but saying it anyway to make him look smarter. I'm starting to doubt about "HIGHIQ" tag in this story too, especially when the Floor Guardians in this story seem to be a stupid bunch. It seems the other characters were being downgraded so MC would look smarter. The MC basically think everything and his subordinates only move when they're ordered, unlike demiurge & others in the original who are capable themselves.All the Subordinates do here was Praise the MC lackadaisically and with very poor construct of words even. I like the your other fanfic but this one is thumbs down.
I had high expectations for this, honestly. It was a refreshing take yet it failed. His(Guild's) Npcs are bland, nothing interesting about them. It feels like you're reading something off a circus. He barely gets here(new world). He complains all the time that he didn't step up his relationship to the virtual girl. And the next thing he does is kissing and inviting her to the castle.. Mc is rather bland, i think i understood the pattern that the author tried to achieve. Yet i feel it didn't work. He's quite bland, not good , yet not very bad. Couldn't make myself to continue further. Good writing. Good plan, bad execution.
A recreation of the original story with a whole new cast of characters. Events play out entirely differently than in the source material with some confrontations being resolved early. This story is decisively AU as the author isn't afraid to kill off named characters.
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Love the way the story shifts away from the original, and how his choices are different from ainz, it's a really good take on overlord. Pls keep writing, really looking forward to his encounter with the princess
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Doing an amazing job recreating the story with a different progratonist! I love how Jack's a Dragon... Cute. Slightly different backstory, with the same twist, just everyone is dead this time. WQ: So far the quality is good, I really like it personally, very few confusing grammar problems or issues that I notice. If any at all. SoU: Very quick releases! Don't burn yourself out, Author-sama, burning out your precious brain and interests will cause problems for us all! SD: The story progresses quickly from what I've been reading, but at the same time, it follows the same pace as the anime/manga and light novel. There are plenty of changes, and their pretty agreeable. I look forward to more. CD: Jack is Jack, a character which the Author continues to use in all his books. It kind of reminds me of how Gene Roddenberry reused the character Dylan Hunt in all of his personal works. The other canon character's interactions with him are believable. Especially with Enri, since before and after she knew of Ainz true nature, she believed in him and wanted to thank him properly. Since the main character isn't undead, I'm sure there is going to be some fluff on the way. If you know what I mean. World Background: The world is a sandbox for the Author, but he continues to build on the aesthetic and even gives the Waste City from the game an appearance not given by the original author of the series. Way to go, ZGear! - Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoy this Review.