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Coiling Dragon · C143
ClaymoreJoe: Everyone is bashing on Linley, but for crying out loud, he's a kid! He's lost both his parents to these people! Do you really think he's going to be eternally patient in such a situation?Coiling Dragon · C143
Axelrod: His behavior is more in keeping with a 12 year old. Let's not even talk about how he didn't put any real effort into killing the king until he was already outside and outmatched... Cause reasons.Coiling Dragon · C143
DaoistLingMing: whats the difference between him killing it after inviting him on a dinner or pretending to be injured either way he is killing it in his own mansion then why bother hiding his role in this murder.Coiling Dragon · C138
Coiling Dragon · C138
Morvian: he didn't think that hus bros will be targeted?~Coiling Dragon · C138
marvomaniac: Who cares about a possible apocalypse scenario? Someone else is gonna clean it up anyways... let's get some more loot and power ups for the kid! ~DoehringCoiling Dragon · C98
Demon Lord's Reincarnation · C1
World Domination System · C1
Mahesvara_: When i saw the cover (from NU) of CD, i'm expecting to get a bloody dark novel― depiction of cruelty novel like wmw. But what i got is full friendship and heartwarming scenes :<
I like it tho.Coiling Dragon · C46
Coiling Dragon · C46
Mahesvara_: Idk why some making a big deal of what Hogg said.
They're not simple nobles, but a Dragonblood warriors, a prideful noble clan. Hogg is a Patriarch and running such a clan is not like playing house. It's a strict family and as a member of such family is Linley's objective.Coiling Dragon · C35
Coiling Dragon · C35
Coiling Dragon · C35
LelloTheSage: He has to act as the current clan Leader, The previus generation had no chance to bring the clan back to his glory. Now that a youth with the chance has appeared, He Has the duty to make the youth understand the burden that he has to carry. Or so i think.Coiling Dragon · C35
Mahesvara_: Either use a European names or Chinese names. Although i prefer westernized, i don't mind chinese names too.
The names put on the side is just a distraction =_=Coiling Dragon · C30
Coiling Dragon · C30
Mahesvara_: Hmm. Alot of complaints with the names. welp i prefer westernized names and i hope for it to stay this way. 😋Coiling Dragon · C15
Coiling Dragon · C15
Ulthor: Retards complaining about names that we could remember. Just FYI those names were written western by the Chinese authorCoiling Dragon · C15
Hawkkkkkkkkkk: Why does everything have to be so huge? It makes absolutely no sense. The golden horned beast is supposedly 400km tall, doesn't that just seem ridiculously needless? 400m would be enough and is a much more relatable height. I can't fucking imagine 400km. I can't imagine being next to something 400km tall. Hell, it's actually impossible to see the entire 400km fucking thing at once.
Fucking imagine you're standing in space as a 1.8m tall human(Luo Feng), talking or looking at a being that's 400 km tall. It just makes no fucking sense. That's a fucking sixth of Pluto's diameter. It's basically a very small (dwarf) planet. Now imagine you're this small human standing on this planet. You're pretty much invisible, can't be spotted. So how would a fucking 400km tall beast ever put anybody into its eyes?
Then there's the fact that the author can't keep his world building straight. First, it's said that space rings can't contain living things. Sure, I'll go for that. But then Luo Feng puts the mother nest inside his internal world, despite not being sector lord in his main body yet and no-one fucking questions it. According to the story, he can't put it in his space ring, so Dylan would know he didn't do that. But hey, my dude Dylan also "knows" he doesn't have an internal world. SO HOW THE FUCK DOES HE STORE THAT SHIT WITH NO-ONE QUESTIONING IT?
And why the **** do we spend so much time on upgrading the golden-horned beast when in the 670 chapters I've read so far it's barely been used at ALL. It's only appeared for a few chapters and I'm pretty sure that was 300+ chapters ago. No need for all this filler.
Also, for a supposed sci-fi space story, the world building is very surface level. I'll give a few examples.
1. Apparently, the human universe is using the length of earth's days as the most common measurement. Why?
2. The constant references within the story like "Gold are as strong and piercing as the sun" make even less sense. The sun? Earth is a fucking irrelevant planet within the universe, why would this be a common saying? There are many other cases like this too.
3. There are so many Chinese names despite the author's intention to portray the universe as a multicultural thing.
4. Apparently, China's mental training is fucking amazing hey-ho and barely anyone else does mental training unless they're a high level undying. Wtf my dudes??? With the universe portrayed as this GIANT thing with trillions of humans in a single galaxy of which there are trillions more. Why wouldn't mental training be more developed and common? Isn't it unlikely that an aboriginal irrelevant planet would have some of the most advanced stuff in this regard? Really doesn't make sense in the context of the story.
Oh yeah and a final tip for you translator. Write 120 million instead of 1.2 hundred million. Oh, and when you actually do it that way, write 910 million instead of 910 hundred million. Oh, whoever's editing this might wanna step up. Like there are some serious issues in pretty much every single chapter with wrong tenses, words, misspellings etc. Like names are actually sometimes spelled 3-4 different ways in 1 chapter alone.Swallowed Star
MissMiia: Nice kid. Sad my country got decimated, I imagine some Filipino man managed to survive somehow and is just chilling in Boracay while cooking some monster.Swallowed Star · C3
Jack_N_Mikhail: What can Jack say?
Jack likes this story very much.
Why? Jack is a fan of Magic, Sorcery and Wizardry/Witchcrafts...
But Jack likes it when these things are scarce. Magic should be more scarce than even the most luxurious mundane item. Otherwise it will seem trivial and easy to obtain. The challenge and difficulty the MC has to overcome to obtain even a glimpse of Magic is exciting to Jack.
There must be balance in the MC's growth. He shouldn't be "Mr know it all" (Mr "calculated on my fingertips" LQY) or Mr Miserable (a loser who fets bullied and kicked around for the first 50chapters.
Neither should the MC be a cuckold, who is bossed around by every other girl he sees...
The MC of this novel meets my requirements. He is neither a celibate monk nor a skirt-chaser.
This novel is currently in Jack's top 10 novel read list of 2017, along with the likes of Warlock of the Magus World, World of Cultivation, Desolate Era and Undefeated God of War etc...The Wizard World
Mahesvara_: Oh i get it i get it! you're right :)
But i guess is it just me then? having a map makes me feel more adventurous like exploring a foggy map on an RPG game, 'unlocking' them by how the novel explain and give a more detailed idea. *shiver* just imagining it excites me. ^^Warlock of the Magus World · C136
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