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Nice, but needs faster updates .............................................................................................................
Guys got a good start if he can keep it rolling. The name for mc is idiotic though, nobody names their kid Jimbo unless his sister is his mom and he is in the sw universe... and why make him midget size, if the guy was a midget before reincarnation why do it again, make him 5 10 or 6 ft it's a good average height and he wont be mistaken for an ugnot or a jawa. Otherwise good job keep it coming we need steady sw stories here. ๐
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He has made some changes and it's looking better just needs a bit of editing. This seems it will be a base/empire building using droids. No hill billy name for the mc and he wont be a midget :) There seems to be a lot of directions he can go and I hope he sticks with it. Just hope he can come up with a title.
Great story so far, grammar and punctuation is good. The story has managed to keep me on my toes throughout the 5 chapters that has been released to this point. The author is very active in the comments as well as catering to the readers. Great story keep it up ๐๐ป.
I really like the story so i gave you a five Star rating but Jango dett pls continue the story i really like IT dont want IT to be dropped IT Has high potential dont listen to haters
Loving it need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more
This book keeps getting better and better I canโt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iโll be able to read thank you ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Woooooohoooo another star wars fanfic... helll yeah... I like how he's planning to build an empire. So need to ask is there going to be any romance? Its okay either way but if there is may I suggest... Padme *wink *wink [slides some power stones]... [clears throat..] He doesn't deserve HER! Hahahhahahah just my shameless opinion no need to spit, bash or any harsh reaction.. also dont drop it. Ohhh please dont.