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Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?
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During the fight against Lord Gwyn, a portal opens and sucks the Chosen Undead and Gwyn inside. Poor Gwyn ends up the familiar of Zero and The Chosen Undead awakes in a forest outside of Orario.
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I really like the story. The idea of knight from Dark Souls is interesting and fresh, you didn't make him op but strong enought to hold his ground and still have the potential to grow I especially like his character that reminds me of kind uncle and of course knight, you really nailed his thoughts and overall actions in way witch really well captures what we should expect of him. Another thing is your story witch although is only starting is already looking interesting. I just hope you won't drop it and stop updating.
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First I want to thank the author for his efforts because writing a story isn't easy at all. I know that so here's my review and take note that it's only based on my opinion. This story is bland, very bland. And it's somewhat forced too. Especially how he took care of Lili, it's very cringe. The mc is also a goodie two shoes idiot . I don't like his personality . Also the mc made Bell become level 2 after only one week of training. A level 4 Minotaur and troll suddenly appeared out of nowhere . sigh , just read it if you still wanted to find out more information
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good Start hope you continue to update................................................................................................................
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love the MC and how he interact with the danmachi world.keep the good work and pls dont drop. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 ..................................
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Well I won't turn you away from reading this, matter of fact this is a good novel on the site. Mc is pretty op, Which is nice. From what I've read I think the big baddie wont just be a danmachi character. I feel the Mc is a bit careless with sharing information about himself, but that's just opinion. Factually of course is the top-shelf spelling and grammar this story has. There is no need to worry about the story seeing that it's solid and has direction.
First review huh... What can I say? It's one of my favorite fanfics. I placed it at 2nd place after Annihilation Maker... That's means a lot in my opinion, cause AM is my favorite FF. What can I say about story? It's very good so far. Mc is a OC from Dark Souls 1, so it will be interest to see some things from his past. Fighting scenes is good enough. Romance is not cringy like in most FF's. Plot is pretty good (insert idubbz meme here), MC is joining Hestia Familia with Bell and invites him in Warrior's of Sunlight covenant (I think? ). Don't really know if this FF need a harem or a single woman but either way I'll read it.=) P. S. Sorry for poor grammar, English is not my native language 😝 P. S. S. In my opinion he need to get ALL sets from all 'soul's like' games . But not like "*booom* Here ya go pal. Full inventory filled with sets from all soul's like games. ". But a slow gaining of all(?) of them. Like getting them from the souls of bosses. (you know, forging them like in ds3) P. S. S. S. (It's 07:40 in my country so don't blame me) Thought about Miracle that Mc can make himself, like with the help from Riveria. That Miracle will be pretty badass in my opinion... Name:Abyss Call Description: "You can try to call for the souls that died from your hand. Maybe some of them will be willing to answer you...." Restriction's: Draining half of the SP(vitality, mana, prana. Whatever...). You can't forcibly call for those who are not wishes to answer your summon. You can't call for those who are was letted go from your personal Abyss. (Example:Solaire of Astora, Quelaag's Sister, etc.). Imagine how bad ass it will to call Sif ,for example. A big BadaWolf(lol) with a big ass sword that will cut all yours enemies. (AND YES I know that this is cringy af and edgy, and that this Miracle probably wouldn't gonna appear in FF, but meh...) I wish a good health for author and his family. I will wait for new chapters like Sif waited for Artorias (lol edgy af). And once again it's 07:50 in my country so please, don't blame me.
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pretty good just dont personally like the way things are going. none of the girls in the mcs soon to be harem are interesting cant find myself caring about them. well im gonna leave here sadly wont be continuing this.
This is one of the best novels I have read. I hope you keep up the great work. I will always be supporting this novel with my spitits stone..........................................................................................................................
I love tHe story i have said this many times and i know being to Strong is boring but i hope its not he is way behind bell i dont like bell he is a cool lIttle dude but as a fanFiC the mc should take the cake The old mc can be pwoerful and sand side by side but necer over shadow the mc you made but i love the fanfic fr 🦾
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Great story, I just read the first chapter and I couldn't stop, the interactions between characters feels natural not forced at all like other fics. keep on the great work author-san.
Wow, i really got in the story despite the lack of chapters. It happens very rarely due to the poor quality of the content in web novel, but we can’t be picky can we now ? Anyway, This concept is interesting, the grammar flawless, the main character already endearing and not some fool chasing an stollen ideal he has no reason to believe in despite him being a honour-bound knight who believes in goodness of hearth. He doesn’t look undead either if it drive you off, all in all the character is cool, the story is cool, and Bell coming a squire makes him less annoying somehow ? Before i forget, Ais best girl !