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A man traveling through Naruto,Onepiece and Irregular Of magic highschool finally arrived at Marvel
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The writing quality is absolute, fucking, dog ****! It's filled with nothing but brain dead content, the author trying to convey his insecurities about his sexuality by having the main character declare himself as straight whenever talking to a guy. The story development can only be compared to my spaghetti code filled with comments and needless lines of code. I would say that reading spaghetti code is better than wasting brain cells with this ****. Character design is the typical **** that you see with low quality garbage on this site, everything is to compensate what the author is lacking. World background is there but not at the same time. Welcome to Qidian, where you can't find someone who can't make use of an already made world to its fullest extent by simply not writing the scenery and details. "This is the worse **** I've ever read in my entire life on this site, I want that 1 paragraph ****ty fan-fiction to be in my library than to ever see this **** again." - Morning Fragrance, Anti-Harem Sect Leader & Founder
3.5 for me On 20 chapters I read this fic has many flaws on grammar and misspelled words. But for me its readable base on my experience reading MTL novel but honestly your grammar and spelling sucks. Just heads up for people reading this MC is OP but author explain that he was limited by world power but he still OP. He has many abilities that he gets from pervious world he jump in like in Naruto, One Piece and Irregular in Magic school. He is born otaku but he isn't chasing woman left and write. That's new ever since I get an impression and I always read that some Otaku reincarnated fic always chasing woman left and write. But it still too bad he didn't even have one lover. Hope author try to improve your grammar and spelling more and please re read your chapter first. I get an impression that english is your first language, sam as I but I hope you still re read the chapters.
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The Grammer is awful,the story is boring and unoriginal, the harem is not played well and is just plain boring. All and all this story is utter trash and I don't recommend it.
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this is a chinese fanfic machine translated ------------------------------------------------------ author san at least respect the work and the mind of the readers
The spelling is awfully (I.E. the title is misspelled) The characters are flat (They do everything Van tells them to) It can be hard to tell who is speaking (Yes, sometimes you put the characterโs name at the beginning like a script but seriously. Stick to one writing method) The story flow isnโt planned very well. I want to call it chaotic, but it can simply be called 'Bad'. If I was asked if this was readable or not, I would have to say not.
Grammar is sh*t, English is sometimes choppy, and the character is sometimes dramatically aggressive. Besides that it's an alright story. . .
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The plots really good, just needs some grammar adjustment. Everything so far was interesting. Keep up the good work..........................................................................
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Bro this story is amazing man just keep dem chapters coming out out๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐๐๐
Bon scenarios (avec development des relation entre MC et le reste des personnages "Principaux" de l'intrigue ) Bonne histoire, elle est peut รชtre une originale des fanfics (Dans le contexte oรน le MC se transport ร Marvel aprรจs avoir vรฉcu dans d'autres mondes {Naruto, one piece.... } , au lieu de la premiรจre traversรฉe )
Whatever above say don't mind it it's awesome novel so please continue Dvgbvcvbggjjhbhhgghbgghgcbhfgbhgfvnhcvvfdfgffhgfggffvvvcvcvvvvggghjhgggggggggggfcddcccccccccvvvgggggghhhgffhnfffhhhbbbccfhjfdejhfhhdhhgdjhfhgfjrghghhfgjngh
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This is your story? . Or a translation? . If it is a translation, what is the original name? ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
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Please complete your work and don't stop in the middle of it alot of people do that ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I'm really enjoying the story, the direction it is taking is incredible. The development of the characters. The right dose of action, romance, slice of life, and more
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I refuse to read this until you fix the fucking title.