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Completing his system's goal, he is given another chance to start anew. His purpose to gather strength to fight a world-threatening event.
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Bleach fanfictions are slightly rare. So, support is needed here. ................................... . . .. .. . . . . . . . ..
i am sick right now so i will make it short 1- Mc with weird personality 2- his sister is the most annoying character in the history of novels 3- how can he sense the attack and the three experienced shinigamis didn't?!!!! sorry i have a headache now so i Will stop.
Like how its going so far but it is stil the beginning of the novel so can't really make a judgement about it except, that it is a good read at the moment.
a very good start impatient to see where this story will happen...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good, but did the romace part just get skipped?? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Are you still alive author? When is the next updates. Massive release chapters please author-san. Are you still alive author? When is the next updates. Massive release chapters please author-san. Are you still alive author? When is the next updates. Massive release chapters please author-san. Are you still alive author? When is the next updates. Massive release chapters please author-san. Are you still alive author? When is the next updates. Massive release chapters please author-san.
with the first chapter you already ruined it in my opinion, why? hahaha, the authors always ruin their novels by doing these things, since in the end they hit a barrier, where it is to rewrite or abandon the novel, if you wanted to write a great bleach story, you could have done it in another way, for example, but first you have to know these data: According to the novel, the origin of the races can be understood as: - Humans: creation of the spiritual king. - Hollow: souls of dead humans. - Quincy: humans who evolved naturally to defend themselves against the hollows, obtaining powers to face them. - Fullbringer: humans who evolved when a fragment of the spiritual king entered their bodies, thus being a race created indirectly by the spiritual king. - Shinigami: humans who, using the power of the spiritual king, changed their race to that of souls. -Now, continuing how to make a great bleach story, you could make your "MC" aizen sosuke !, It is not very difficult to understand his character, but this aizen would have a few modifications like: - this "aizen MC" begins as a human, several years before the birth of yhwach (they mention that there were quincys before yhwach was born, understanding that the quincy that yhwach created would be like quincy slaves?), then this aizen would be born with the quincy races and fullbringer, as this "aizen MC" would know in the world that he was reborn, besides that this world is more realistic than the one he read, things would be very different, he would realize the powers with which he was born, since his parents They would train, a fullbringer father and a quincy mother (the "MC aizen" dominated the basics of fulbringer as "aura of the novel" and the handling of reishi by quincy to perfection) his parents had it when they were of legal age, so they died of old age, but are reborn in the society of souls! - The "MC aizen" as he knows the method to become a shinigami, plus the masterful control of the soul, easily forces his soul to separate from his body and controls his spiritual body easily, becoming a shinigami, in addition to immediately obtaining his zanpakuto kyouka suigetsu and his shikai! (As ichigo, he obtains his zanpakuto without the need for an asauchi, besides the asauchi are more a method of espionage by their creator), once he became a shinigami he would practice a bit and return to his mortal body, also like this "MC aizen "knows the method to awaken the bankai fast, uses it, and succeeds !, having his three maximum transformations of each race !, the shinigami that would be the" Bankai ", the" perfect fullbringer "that would be comparable to the bankai , and quincy's that would be the "Vollstรคndig" (he obtained it because he knew how to obtain it from the manga he read in his previous life). once obtained the maximum form of the three races, its essence of fullbringer would begin to absorb the other two that would be the shinigami and quincy (since it was seen that the ichigo began to do so), this would take a long time, but while his essences merge, he could transform into shinigami while still using his mortal body (as iso "kugo ginjo"), the "MC aizen" would go to the society of souls to learn the kido, etc., since he is a novice in those things, he would appear in the poorest sector of the rukongai, he would lower his gigantic and enormous reishi to the limit with his master control over it, he would put under his perfect illusion the sector where he appeared so that they think there was always there, naturally a shinigami would realize that his reishi is big and has a talent for being a shinigami, where he would take him to the shinigami school, and start the aizen school trip, where he would learn all the arts he doesn't know, kidos, etc., he would always put the shinigamis under the illusion perfect so that they see that their shikai is normal (since this would not be normal or would look like one). in time he would create the "perfect hollow" that would be "white" using evil shinigami, would make him bite him, white would die, and "MC aizen" would awaken his internal hollow already in the "vast lorde" phase (it would be the same as the ichigo), his fullbringer essence would absorb his hollow essence to merge, making "Mc aizen" more powerful, as his essences merge, his life limit shoots up to eternal, as well as his youth, when his essences finish merging , would gain immortality (the shinigami are souls with powers, the souls themselves are eternal, so all the shinigamis should have life and youth in their entirety eternal, only they do not know it, and then because they get old ?, they would unconsciously control their appearance, they would stay with a bigger appearance for them to take seriously, the one about yhwach who said that yamamoto had become soft / weak, it could be that because as yamamoto had stopped killing so much, his bloody aura weakened with time or, in addition to this that he had lost an arm, and stopped training), then the "MC" would create his hogyoku that would be imperfect, he would use only souls of evil beings, in doing so he would not gain enemies who say he sacrificed innocents in creation from your hogyoku. and I could go on and on, you just have to think hard about the idea, this idea that I comment for a bleach fanfic would be great, besides it is something new.
A great take of the Bleach universe with original characters, power progression and team building with the story straying further from the original as the story progresses. Some scenes, while similar to the original end up much differently due to the MC and his influence. Looking forward to the story ahead. Some criticism from myself. Certain scenes and events aren't explained fully. Such as the incident with his sister and foster father being thrown into the future and how the MC knows this. The other disconnect is also regarding his sister when she returns from the mirror incident. While many years have past for him, for his sister and foster father, it was experienced as a few seconds. His bro-con sister behaviour becomes non-existent when she returns. Another important thing missing from the MC is proper goals. We see him reaching for more power while being unable to protect those close to him. While this can be one of his goals, it's also mentioned by the MC that he wants to become a God. Reasons for this is unknown to us. The MC was also an emperor in his previous life. Just by looking at the rural district he grew up in and how it is always referenced which districts certain shinigami grew up in, it would be assumed the Emperor personality become a part of his identity and sees how he, as ruler of soul society can improve upon the lives of those living in these rural districts. At the moment, it may be that he is still amassing power before he attempts any of his plans for soul society, but having that insight into his goals makes him a more developed character... Just my personal feeling on the matter. Not sure if it would help improve the story or not. Still going to be reading it in the future. Go Author!
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Come read the story is sooooo freaking good the writing is good the uptdate are good the background is good the chara design is GOOOOD the story developement is please read and ask him more chapter because number is POWER !!! MOAR AUTHOR-SAMA PLEASE I BEG YOU I WANT MOAR !!
this story does not deserve such a dry assessment, so I will restore the balance, firstly, the main character spends points to save memories, after a minute his class memories are erased, leaving only useless ones that he could get on his own without any difficulties, secondly, his sister infuriates me, like and their interactions on the part of mc, thirdly, the main character spent glasses to get eyes that see through illusions, but for some reason he didnโt see Aizen and I donโt want to know what the author will come up with to justify this disgrace like โhe needs to turn on his eyes like sharingan" or something like that, the author, before he even started the story, immediately ruined it
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There isnโt a lot of Bleach fanfics so this was nice reading. Story was good, MC wasnโt dense as black hole or beta. Time skips were clearly marked so it wasn't confusing. I think it was solid 3,5-4 till plot with different timelinesโฆso i had to stop after second timeline. Anyway good job. Itโs hard to write own fanfic so good luck with next one:)
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Really donโt know what to say. In my opinion the best Bleach fanfic there is. The story is great and fun. Surprising as well. There is no problem with writing quality and the Mc. He is nice but not too nice and definitely not beta Mc. One of my favorites except the update frequency.
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