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He was running through the thick, dark forest surrounded by nothing, but danger and right now he was being hunted. Rushing along the path while holding on to a delicate armament, ain’t a joke but, when it’s something you risked it all for, it’s worth it.
"Don’t let him get out of sight!” A shout echoed through, that nearly shuddered him. He was fast, but he had to take the lead, being caught by the soldiers meant nothing but trouble.
After entering a denser region of the forest, he used one of his exclusive skills. ‘Stealth’, and he vanished.
“What the hell? Where did he go! Find him!” He could see those soldiers conversing from a few branches above. Climbing that fast certainly helped him good.
Now he had to wait for them to scatter away, which they did in just a while allowing him to escape.
Entering a castle certainly proved to be a difficult task, but to him it was just a daily routine. He walked right through the castle halls and entered a seemingly familiar room.
“Alas! finally there’s no one on my back!” He thought, letting out a sigh of relief he entered the room but was caught off-guard as he was pinned by a girl, young and beautiful but rather stronger than him.
“Got you Prince!”
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Write a reviewThe story seems great as it is only the start but I like the base of the story with characters. I hope to see a lot of adventures and wars of magic.
I liked the way it's written! Hope it climbs the ranks! I like the characters very much. Vivian is so Kawaiii !!! The updates are still stable and as much as I've read, I am able too visualize the scenery! The world seems to get bigger and looks like there will be a few more characters in the novel in coming chapters! It's getting interesting!
After reading this far, I believe I can say they story is still true to it's core! And I loved the Character Development so far. Lately the chapters are updating a bit irregularly, but I think Author is trying to keep up with it hard so, no need to push, once a day is enough! Hope to see more coming.
I like the VIvian's character the most. I hope that dull of a prince get's to know her feelings. And wait? Why does his sister has a brother complex or something? That'd fun though! For a new Author, you're doing well! Keep up.
I like the style! It's rare though, but hey! Keep it up, content is very readable no issues, start using some heavy terms and it'll be fun. Also, Don't give up, I want to read it through...(That's my selfish self)
The writing style is improving chapter by chapter! Do keep looking in comments for improvements! I wish you a good luck and keep imrovising your work!
I like the theme! I'm quite new on webnovel as I'm usually strolling on Wattpad. After reading this, the story is going to go for a long run i guess. I wish you a good luck! I liked Aeneas, he sounds like Yato from Noragami! (If you've not seen it, check it on man!)
Stumbled on this one while scrolling through fantasy realm! So, it seems like I can read this one. Some twisted Gods! and this whole hell and heavens and levels... You are keeping a good track of it! In future I'd like to see how vast this world you've given birth to will become DosxNova. (never heard of such username man, it's quite unique)
I'm more like a guy who choses books by covers, so I'll give a star for good cover. Judging by the style of your writing, you must be an artist as the scenery is elaborated in such way. I like the detailed expressions though don't get carried away by it. For a newcomer we are getting some good storied on webnovel now! Don't worry about cliffhangers, you can go easy on it every now and then. I've read novels by Ash Knight and i like this new style too. keep up, here's a vote by me for your efforts.
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Going good so far! Let's see how does the Author justify the plot! I believe the writing can be a bit more mature and bold, also you should also provide some prologue so new readers cold understand the terms better.