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R34 Economy with a twist.
Disclaimer: I don't own all the crossover.
Another Disclaimer: This is an Extreme AU
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Overall an interesting work with one major issue. The only issue is that the Author does not know how to use tenses. In other words, the author doesn't know to add "ed" to the end of verbs describing past events, or add "s" to the end of words that are plural. Overall an issue that could easily be fixed just by pasting the story into word.
One of the rare Dxd fics that doesn't come across as a retread of canon. Also the mc does not go overboard with summons or harem so it is fairly easy to keep track of all the characters.
Awesome......................................................................... Needs stability............................................
The grammar is truly atrocious and it's not a very imaginative story. Mostly just the grammar though.
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I don't know what to say but this is a great story,........................................................................................................ ............... ..... ................................. .............
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Germ, this book is shiny germ in this grey world.. Please.. Please... Please.... Please, dont drop this diamond.. Although iits still rough, but after time been refined it will shine like a moon in the darkest night...
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is it possible for small snippets/ a sequel where they visit the worlds where the companions are summoned frm? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
good harem but it needs stability, could write and release once a week or something like that would maintain some stability and could have several chapters saved
loved how it's didn't revolve around the main DXD cast and while still a harem it was limited in a way that was appropriate[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Writing Quality: Errors are few and none are jarring enough to break immersion. Stability Of Updates: Updates occurred fairly frequently, but without a set schedule, the time between updates becoming more spread out as the story progressed. Story Development: Was fairly decent, though a little narrow. Could have used some exposition occasionally. Character Design: Fairly good, but also fairly one-dimensional due to locking people into flame stereotypes which removed any uniqueness. More development would have been nice. World Background: This was supposed to be a massive crossover world, but turned into DxD with irrelevant HP world and four chapters where Bloodbourne made a brief appearance but affected nothing where only DxD plot mattered. That being said, A lot was written about Romania which in the original series was mostly irrelevant other than the fact that Valerie and Gasper came from there. So all in all, a little good - a little bad. Overall: Fairly good, but not multi-read good. Which considering the amount of horrible writing i've seen on this site, means this is in the top 10th percentile.
The ending was great, when is season 2 coming put? ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธโ๏ธ๐โ๏ธ๐โ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐งฎ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐
Great ending, somehow you managed to get the story to produce a feeling of a flame that would continue burning forever with love and affection. You are a masterful writer and I look forward to getting to feel that in your next books. The ending is amazing!!! How do you do that!?!??
It was a great story, very original and fun way to make it a harem story and not be OP from the start. It was quite fun reading it and waiting for new updates. I hope you will make something similar good later on.
Well. This story could be great, but in the end, it's just a harem fanfic with uninteresting main characters, a ton of cliche and easiest power struggle out of there. I liked how thoughtful you was in power description. I liked how you make use of them I liked characters for harem *. I don't like how easily he gets them. I mean make them brainwashed lovers ,and mc getting all white of how he dislike it, but still need they powers ....yeah, I cringed hard, but at least it's was glossed over fast. And then there is story itself and mc. Why he doing anything he does ? Because it's best option? Yeah, sure. That's the problem, I don't feel like mc have more in him, than just conviniet function to make good decisions. The same with his character changes*, when he introduced flames, I was already iffy. But when he reminded of sky flames...i just realized how deep the rabbit hole. Either way, story don't have much tension or interesting moments. P. S. When you go in dxd and create harem only from the girls you summoned from another world(and Valerie, I dropped it) ....what? There is no good girls in dxd?