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  • Power Manipulator in Dxd

    Power Manipulator in Dxd

    Anime & Comics

    4.6

    1. Died 2. Meet a God 3. Reincarnated 4. .... 5. Profit A man reincarnated and explored the universe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patreon.com/LuxVonDeux If you want to buy me some coffee to make me more refreshed and continue writing more chapter ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I will also be posting this story on RoyalRoad

  • Wandering Saint

    Wandering Saint

    Fantasy

    There is a legend about Wandering Saint who able to heal the most dangerous sickness and able to fight even the most Powerful Demon. This is a story about a man who travel across the continent with his Companion with his side.

  • Overpowered Beast (Worm CYOA Multicross)

    Overpowered Beast (Worm CYOA Multicross)

    Anime & Comics CYOA

    John Railey is a fanfic writter who write just for fun. one night when he going home from his work John got email from his fan requesting for WORM CYOA fanfic. Accepting the challenge John then write his fanfic for his fans. ======================================= Disclaimer : I don't own anything in this fanfic.

  • Marvel Read SCP Foundation Report

    Marvel Read SCP Foundation Report

    others

    After the End Game Story, Tony Stark ordered F.R.I.D.A.Y to search another threat to the Earth and then stumble upon an Organization named SCP Foundation. *WARNING* This story is placed in an Alternate Universe or AU. You have been warned. *Disclaimer* I don't own Marvel and SCP Foundation

  • The Red Saint

    The Red Saint

    Fantasy

    Gabriel is an orphan who wants to be a doctor to help other people with his knowledge. One day when he walked toward his apartment, He died that day because of some accident he doesn't know. His journey is not to stop there as he wakes up afterward. ============================= I will also be posting this story on RoyalRoad

  • Fate/Gacha: Unlimited Salt Work

    Fate/Gacha: Unlimited Salt Work

    Fantasy

    A man Transported to another world with Fate/Grand Order Gacha System.

  • Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work

    Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work

    Anime & Comics

    4.7

    A man Transported to another world with Fate/Grand Order Gacha System. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patreon.com/LuxVonDeux Ko-Fi.com/LuxVonDeux If you want to buy me some coffee to make me more refreshed and continue writing more chapter

  • I Just Want My Peaceful Life

    I Just Want My Peaceful Life

    Eastern Fantasy Reincarnation Overpowered MC Xianxia I Guess Overprotective Big Brother

    Guan Wei, The third prince of the Wei Empire, but in the eyes of people, Guan Wei is the trash prince. The Cripple Prince. The one who doesn't have a spiritual root. That all is his title, but there is a hidden title that people don't know that is 'Protective Older Brother' and 'Protective Son.' "You dare to touch my beautiful sister? Then taste my Sword. Do you dare to mock my Little Brother? Then here is my fist. No one mocks my family and done with it because I'm the Immortal of mount Chi." That is another title that people don't know. Guan Wei is the Immortal of Mount Chi, the most dangerous place in the entire world, but Guan Wei conquers it with his eye closed.

Moments

No you misunderstand me. Just watch HISHE Super Cafe then you will know. I know batman is naive in the comic and movie but HISHE Batman is different View More

swordzero: Batman is naive and stupid how many times has batman captured the joker and how many times has the joker escaped from prison? Also how many people has the joker killed every time he escaped, the answer too many. That could all be prevented by killing the joker and saving thousand of lives.

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C43
9 hours ago
Watch HISHE Super Cafe on youtube.

This Batman is great View More

swordzero: I didn't get the omake since i really hate batman as a character.

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C43
13 hours ago
Yes View More

Lv99: Thanks for the chapter.
HISHE? Super Cafe?

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C43
14 hours ago
Mission failed, we'll get him next time. View More

Von_Krieg: damn it

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C39
3 days ago
Gay Bulged? That is the ultimate form of Gae Bolg View More

Vitamorte: Gae Bolg Ultimate Form Goooooooooooooooooooo

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C38
4 days ago

Horusz: The vast majority of fanfiction writers are "amateurs", I don't say that to offend anyone, but it is the truth, many are learning and others just want to "kill time", so in many fanfics we see basic mistakes, mistakes like: side characters are not interesting, the protagonist existence is irrelevant and don't causes any changes in the world, the novel is poorly writing, there is no world building, a lot of plot armor, relationships are robotic, among other things ...

What makes us read these novels is usually the universe in which the fanfic takes place and the MC, I am not saying that the MC of these novels (which I quoted) are perfect, I am saying that the chosen universe is very interesting, have interesting characters and that a protagonist different can make you see things in a different way: New romances, new battles, new skills, new characters, a new world ...

What I mean by all of this is: This novel is not well written and the character is ridiculously written. The universe of "seven deadly sins" is interesting by itself, but that is all.
The relationships are summarized in a few lines "Ender loves her, that is it.", The dialogues are stupid, they look like children talking to each other, the protagonist is one of the worst protagonist's that i ever seen, he is: absolutely coward, dumb as fk, weak, embarrassed , has mental disabilities and other problems.
The MC does not EVOLVE, each and every human being is able to evolve, a person can change drastically in a few years, there is a saying that says: "The same frog never drinks from the same lake", the protagonist lived for more than 3000 years, and even so he didn't evolve as a "person", the only thing that changed was the development of "mental illnesses", this is insane.
He is supposed to be involved in all major events, but he is so insignificant that he cannot change anything at all, this is a ridiculous strategy by the author to include him in the plot as an important character, the existence of the protagonist is irrelevant.

There is no world building, there is no relationship building, there is no character evolution, there are no adventures, there are no changes in the original timeline, the protagonist is watching the events happen, that is all.

Goodbye.

Seven Deadly Sins: Enders struggle as a pacifistic demon.
6 days ago

kwertiyup: lol at first i thought this was going to be a good fanfic without the author fanboying to the strawhats but then it turned to a typical one piece novel and yes he didn't join the strawhats but he is just with yhem the whole time, it's basically him joining without really joining them the author is pretending to be a deep thinker and already planning the "BIG THING" but lol no the only thing happening so far is the mc beating up luffy's enemy while he bumps into them, that's basically the whole patern of the story so far (the mc goes to an island defeat the enemy luffy was supposed to take down and show everyone how "MIGHTY" he is and them bump into strawhats)
what a fucking joke

One Piece - Martialised
6 days ago

Vsycamore: I mean, the fact that this is basically a rehash of One Piece w/ an OP OC is a good enough reason for most people to hate it.

People usually want One Piece OC fanfictions with an interesting protagonist that goes off and does their own thing, exploring the bigass One Piece world. When they get an OC that basically just hovers around a single crew, they think, fuq, you might as well have just read One Piece or done another character SI from the canon.

People have already read One Piece. They don't need to read a less balanced V2.

But then again, there are people who like this kind of stuff, and fanfictions were never meant to be some serious form of literature. It's just an expression of what if "this" happened instead of "that"? Literally, that's the definition of fanfiction.

The concept of your fanfic is bound to have a lot of haters, author. But then again, also a lot of fanatics. It's kind of like a BTS Wattpad fanfiction...

Hehe. I'll just leave this here.

One Piece - Martialised
6 days ago

GoldenBeast: Writing Quality: 3/5 Although it has some errors in writing, it does not make romance impossible to read

Stability of Updates: 5/5: The story performance rate is excellent.

Story Development: 1/5 The development of the story is very weak, even though passing chapters seems to have progressed to nothing. The story is quite stagnant

Character Design: 1/5 Character design is just awful, both mc as the other characters have zero development. They are simply one-dimensional characters, relationships are extremely forced, the original characters act extremely different from the original versions, and that's not the problem if the author had developed the characters and showed their personality evolution, it wouldn't have this problem, but they just act that way by acting. The mc is a like a cheap copy of Mahouka's Shiba Tatsuya no Koukou Rettousei. The Shiba Tatsuya of this story has zero character development. Not to mention that girls fall in love with him almost instantly or even in the first chapter he interacts with they.

World Background: 1/5 The author simply does not develop the world mc is in, even though a large part is already explained in the original work the development of the world background is zero!
Bottom line: If you like to see characters without personality, it's a story that doesn't "go forward" and has zero development. Having chapters that revolve around mc do nothing and all girls fall in love with him for no reason, even though he's torturing the girl's brother in front of her. So that's your kind of story.

Life in DXD
6 days ago

ShuraTheDestroyer: The concept of the story is interesting, quite interesting indeed. But the retarded MC, perverted to the extreme, cowardly and irritating spoiled the whole story. Seriously, this mc is worse than the pervert of the original story, look, this is an almost impossible conquer. Not to mention that an ***** man has reincarnated, in a dragon egg, and he is not even 2 weeks old, he is thinking only with his head down, at the point of fantasizing with a little girl of 10. Man, this is sick, and it was more than once, these perverted insinuations with Koneko, a 10 year old child ... Man, does the author think this is comedy?

Not to mention that Tiamat's personality was totally distorted, she would never act like that, and seriously did you write that she would send a baby dragon less than 1 month old to spy and keep demons from a noble house? That could be a big political problem! Not to mention that almost all episodes are full of comedy and jokes, I like comedy, but in almost all episodes? Hell no!

The update quality is very good and the grammar looks very readable, although I am not fluent in English and may not be seeing such errors.

The quality of the World Build and the development of the characters is worse than the other story about dxd by the same author. And this new MC is totally boring and unbearable, the other one at least was bearable, and even cool, the only point that spoiled that story was the forced adoption that the MC had, and his fear of changing canon events.

Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System!
6 days ago

Reign_Bloodark: What a milf indeed. The literal mother of life. The ultimate milf.
Don't take this seriously but it will be hella cool if she just got contracted as servant or will be around for a bit. I know it won't make sense at all and stuff but just sharing my fantasy

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C36
6 days ago
Seriously tho, read for at least 5 chpater. If you dont like it then okay i guess View More

Peace12345: Well I usually like your stories but you ruined it with a gender bend. Dropped. He is probably even going to marry a guy or some crap like that.

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C1
1 week ago
Lol, read first View More

Peace12345: Well I usually like your stories but you ruined it with a gender bend. Dropped. He is probably even going to marry a guy or some crap like that.

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C1
1 week ago
You do some gacha in the middle of a fight? View More

SpeeSage: gacha?

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C33
1 week ago
Well, you can't do some gacha when Shishou is training you. Morning till Afternoon Farming. Afternoon till Night training with Shishou. Shishou training is hell on earth. View More

SpeeSage: 1 week no gacha? really?

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C32
1 week ago
In the name *PUNCH* of LORD *PUNCH* I TAME *PUNCH* YOU.

And do it for at least 5 hours, you will get yourself a dragon. View More

FinzRaizer: I need Martha.... to Punch some to tame some dragon with Prayer (fist) and fist some god XD

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C29
1 week ago
Custer is for cu chulainn caster. We have 2 Cu so i need to make a different for both of them View More

LiYao: please change custer to caster

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C28
1 week ago
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I’m Harry Potter (MCU Xover) · C0
1 week ago

KuMoKo: I am the exp of my sword.
Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless review.
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.

So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work
1 week ago

Sokanas: Feels like a HUGE copy of 'FANTASY SYSTEM' by that Chinese dude.

Writing quality is poor and confusing.
Story mirrors existing work in such a way it almost feels like plagarism.
Characters are 1D and have little substance.

Background is a typical Boy X enter Anime Mashup XYZ world with nothing new or different.

the Great Anime Fantasy System
1 week ago

WTFman: Really disappointing to hear that this author deletes reviews kinda scummy really. Feels like a cheap rip off of Fantasy System with a side of crap writing. I say that because this story just feels like plagiarism with nothing original just a bunch of copy and paste.

the Great Anime Fantasy System
1 week ago

DevilTriggered: Look here, let's be honest for a second. It's horrible. Grammar is like mtl and pace is totally like Chinese watery-story, where authors writes fillers and sprinkle some story in between..... There people who said it's copy/translate from fantasy system, I don't know, don't read it. But feels like one, even without people pointed out. We have standard character, who even though reincarnated/transmitted to anime world, act exactly like beta anime protagonist. With Chinese love for lengthy useless story and law of cencure, I don't see it go in real harem with r-18 scenes, so tags is fraud(maybe). Action tag - are you joking? With pace like caterpillar and starting skills only in cooking? (of course guy don't have any skills from his past life) Anyway, more generic story, hard to find.

the Great Anime Fantasy System
1 week ago

Logic_Or_Reasoning: So you’ve given Natsu more power when really he would’ve become far stronger then in the anime by just not being at the s rank exams so giving him more power seems unnecessary. Especially as if he thought they were dead he could’ve had that whole I’m not losing anyone else mentality to train and become the big daddy of the guild due to him needing to mature mentally. I’ve given the book a low review because the strengths of the story don’t really fit into the criteria.

Fairy Tail: The Fourth Master
1 week ago
Well if you have 2 mil yen then at least you will get one 5-star servant. View More

AsuraMonarch: This is the reason I don't play Gacha games. I don't have that kind of luck.

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C27
1 week ago
The story is following Canon from the beginning. The author changes something, but by the end of the Arc, the outcome is still the same. Basically, he didn't change anything at all. Welp View More

Rildec: Hrm I guess dont get your hopes up as I did, as you will be disappointed, the plot is very similar to the original but with some divergence since mc is here, not much mind you. Mc is in a "sealed state" cliche, he is somewhat weak, idk why aithor even used a god as mc. He can only be considered strong against servants without their noble phantasms or trump cards. When people complain about him being weak, author justifies story by saying mc thrashed his opponents at certain points in the fight. but to me a loss is a loss, being knocked out or ending up in a worse state means you've lost the exchange. Being saved from battles still puts you in a position lower than your opponents which should count as a loss if you end up having to be rescued and run away. The description is deceptive if you thought mc would be strong, all his background does is make him edgier.

Another thing, story was deleted at some point, I speculate because author didnt like people complaining? All his replies say look at the pinned but he has changed it, so I cant find out why.

FGO: Evil God
1 week ago

Rildec: Hrm I guess dont get your hopes up as I did, as you will be disappointed, the plot is very similar to the original but with some divergence since mc is here, not much mind you. Mc is in a "sealed state" cliche, he is somewhat weak, idk why aithor even used a god as mc. He can only be considered strong against servants without their noble phantasms or trump cards. When people complain about him being weak, author justifies story by saying mc thrashed his opponents at certain points in the fight. but to me a loss is a loss, being knocked out or ending up in a worse state means you've lost the exchange. Being saved from battles still puts you in a position lower than your opponents which should count as a loss if you end up having to be rescued and run away. The description is deceptive if you thought mc would be strong, all his background does is make him edgier.

Another thing, story was deleted at some point, I speculate because author didnt like people complaining? All his replies say look at the pinned but he has changed it, so I cant find out why.

FGO: Evil God
1 week ago

TheTrueGilgamesh: It's good as a casual story but not something i can take seriously a lot of false promise in the story sure the writter didn't promise it but you to those that read it it should come up as an indirect promise for example we have the title A Not So Evil God that title should already say he is an evil god but the thing is he isn't it's just his title and he isn't acting like an evil god would which i'm not gonna lie it irritates me the other i don't is the concept of the MC itself he comes of as a god who is screwed by the gods over and over again even he is hated by the human and yet hr still obey them(Don't give the "He has no choice excuse" because every has a choice) he obey them maybe because he is afraid of them or just ingrained in him considering he is punished by Ra for many years to suffer and yet he didn't even displayed some emotion you expect from a person who suffers the thing about the MC is that it rely's heavily on the "pity factor" the Mc rely on it so much to put the story in progress the MC should be the "If you don't like it do something about it"because he is claimed to be fighting gods alone before he is punishbut what the MC really is "I don't like it but i can't do something about it" personality plus the most annoying shiit that i read in this story is your typical "GIVE MC OP POWER" then nerf cause apparently you don't need the MC to be powerful in this story where the weakest servant is capable of destroying you but the worst offender in this story is the MC's personality in just doesn't no matter how many filler explanation the writter do you just don't suddenly love humans or just suddenly become a goody too shoe in just instant then at same time you are evil god it's just stupid and maybe the author will explain it better in the next chp or more but i just don't like investing my time to a story i don't like well i like it at first but 10 or so chp i just lost interest it's not bad it's just my taste aren't inclined to this MC he is too subservient for me..

FGO: Evil God
1 week ago

kelpshake: If the comment is basically the top comment here that actually talks about the story with multiple people agreeing , then it’s most likely true . I don’t need to waste my time reading the story when the reviews are here. That’s what they are for. Tells you something if someone who hasn’t read the book understands what the dude you were arguing with was talking about when you yourself don’t.

FGO: Evil God
1 week ago
Gudako tells her not to use it because Gudako still didn't want the other to know that Lily has the original Excalibur. View More

overfrenzy: um, didn't Lily get Excalibur from ascension? or does she still use Caliburn fro np?

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work · C25
2 weeks ago

AdustUnreal: I find the story to be rather good considering the average around here.
I also like how the writer mentions that the characters are engaging in 18+ bonding activities without it escalating to a NSFW tips novel.
The writing seems rather monotone but I will manage.
Recommended.

Fate/Gacha: Infinite Salt Work
2 weeks ago
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