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    Power Manipulator in Dxd

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    1. Died 2. Meet a God 3. Reincarnated 4. .... 5. Profit A man reincarnated and explored the universe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Patreon.com/LuxVonDeux If you want to buy me some coffee to make me more refreshed and continue writing more chapter

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Alfan_ricuh: Good vocation no good adventure

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C48
2 days ago

LuxVonDeux: Its different, each power Yu copy will have ALL power other gain so even though he copy it from isshiki Yu will gain other rinnegan power and combine them

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C46
5 days ago
Its different, each power Yu copy will have ALL power other gain so even though he copy it from isshiki Yu will gain other rinnegan power and combine them View More

EVE_CHAN: Every Rinnegan user have their own special ability, so Yu should have one too
Kaguya = Six Dimensions
Madara = Limbo Hengoku
Sasuke = Thay swap thing, i forgot the name
Momoshiki = Absorb and Release
Urashiki = Space-Time Travel

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C46
5 days ago

JosePascua: If I say beautiful or beautifull to a girl like my relatives like my sister, cousin, niece, mother, stepmother, godmother, teacher or stepsisters, it is not that I wanted to **** them, of course not.
NT: now people do not think with their heart or brain, but with their penis
>:v-

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C45
6 days ago
Err remember this kurama not yet enslaved or caged by human, yes he hate them but not to the point where he got sealed inside naruto.

As for he saying beautiful well its like when i see my sister in law... i say the same thing... man those titties.

Anyway yeah kurama say that because first he never see any kitsune except himself and never meet a kitsune that have power as much as him and Senjutsu User at that.

That is my reasoning, and dont worry Kurama will not try take yasaka because he already feel yasaka mark on Yu. View More

PanKeRio: Well yeah
But
Its not this thats A problem

Well not exactly A problem per say
More like
Would you like The feeling of someone telling your gf shes beautiful straight to her face in your presence when he knows shes yours already?
If not jelaous it will be a bit complicated yeah?

So its more of me not understanding The whole action
Of calling her beautiful
If you were to say more in that place
I think it wouldve been better
As in more than A i dont know how to call it

The problem is in The lack of understanding
Yes thats it
And even then whats so beautiful about her
She looks like A human so is It The feel of her chakra
The feel of her nature
Or what?
Cuz kurama dislikes humans at best

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C45
6 days ago
Yeah kurama know, but cant people just say beutiful to beutiful thing? View More

PanKeRio: Shouldnt kurama know she Has a mate?
Wouldnt his scent be on her?
Or Some kind of Mark or aura with same effect?

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C45
6 days ago
And you wrong again... View More

frangky: Kaguya already eat it because of that she got corrupt, but she wants more when i said hagoromo doesn't know is he doesn't know his mother plan until he see what happen also when he heard from toad. She also doesn't need the Mugen tsukoyomi. She just let the tree absorb their energy and the husk of their body become white zetsu

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
And which part i do hastly? Its only 2 chapter in this world and both of them explaining about the current timeline and introducing a group that MAYBE summoning Gedo Mazo instead of madara, i dont even write about the group name if i choose a different title maybe people will not know abou the said group, i want the reader to connect it themself even though its easy to notice that is why write the said group name in the title. View More

frangky: That's why I said you to hasty it will better you slowly introduce it, not all people watch boruto you know. For that the only who can unseal kaguya is the power of hagoromo power because the one seal her his him also his brother is watching the mazo gado after hagoromo split the mad one eye god which also seal in moon. He also want remain with his mother not watching the seal.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
And you are wrong again, Kaguya eat chakra fruit is to unify the world with her infinite tsukoyomi after shse done that she will create an army to fight her own clan Otsutsuki that will be angry because she take chakra fruit for herself.

Its not hagomoro that preparing to fight momonoshiki its kaguya, hagomoro only seal her mother because he think she is gone mad (which is true) but not look at future threat. View More

frangky: Hagoromo doesn't know it. He can seal it not because she prepare the momoshiki coming. He can seal it because he train with the toad. Also when they know what his mother plan and his already corrupt with the mad eye one god.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
And after kaguya? I am including a story coming from boruto where there is some organization that already working from warring state era.

And for hagomoro, as you said he only watching his sons souls that reincanated to different person not the world and you know something funny? The one that watch Kaguya prison is his brother on the moon. View More

frangky: Maybe he is like that because he roam in dimension gap there isn't people who can pass him to dxd universe to invade also from dxd to other universe. As hagoromo, he also watching when his son has been reincarnation until Naruto and Sasuke as his son reincarnation generation. That he know black zetsu existing but he didn't intervene because he already. And their universe center in kaguya and beast tail so basically he watch the world.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
Also hagomoro only able to SEAL his mother while momoshiki otsutsuki is MORE stronger than kaguya that is the reason she prepared herself to defeat momoshiki when he come to her View More

frangky: When I said that hagoromo also notice our mc come to his universe not only black zetsu but he chose not to intervene. I think you should interact with him. Hagoromo is strong because only him and his brother who can seal kaguya. He isn't a sage of six path for nothing and his soul still watching this universe and protect it when kaguya seal broken. When said like great red is they have same role watching and protect their universe. But power wise great red is stronger.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
Hagomoro is not the watcher of this world, he is the watcher to his mother that he sealed with his brother, Great Red is not a watcher of his universe he just a Dragon that mind his own business that is doing some trick with his motorcycle.

Black zetsu know they are in the area is because his base is near land of Hot Water where he can watch Uchiha clan from afar but not too far either. View More

frangky: When I said that hagoromo also notice our mc come to his universe not only black zetsu but he chose not to intervene. I think you should interact with him. Hagoromo is strong because only him and his brother who can seal kaguya. He isn't a sage of six path for nothing and his soul still watching this universe and protect it when kaguya seal broken. When said like great red is they have same role watching and protect their universe. But power wise great red is stronger.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
Hagomoro? When did i include him and Hagomoro is like great red? What? which naruto you watching? Hagomoro is weaker than Kaguya how come hagomoro like Great Red? View More

frangky: From I see you to hasty with your story. Like previous chapter when Mr black go to teaching scene too sudden for me it would better if you do introduction first like go to howgart or talk with albus. I think you should build up the story in each world. From this chapter you to hasty to kill black zetsu and hagoromo also notice him because hagoromo like great red, you should like meet and interact with him. That is what I see. Maybe this will help you to improve 😉😉😉

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
Please tell what is weird i cant correct them if you just say that this is weird and not saying what part is weird View More

frangky: Like Lize said the plot became weird.. I suggest you finish one world than you ascend to new world. If you go like this the plot became weird and you will stuck in the story later when you go back to main world. This is my advice for you author. And not all the reader read the fan-fic you said. So make a clear character so reader can know who are they?

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C44
1 week ago
3 member is enough View More

bazooka84: If my memomrie is ok autor said 3to 4 wife no more
Ask him for the exact number

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C43
1 week ago

Ivan_Accosano: If I'm not wrong the harem is already completed ,also I think there is no need to add more people to the harem It will make the current members less important and lose some development

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C43
1 week ago
That is UK magical community not the world, don't said as it was effecting to another country, yes there is love potion,mental magic but there is always a counter spell for it.

You say it as it was in other country as well, yes there will be always bad apple in other country, but it was not as bad as UK magical communities. View More

Ryuu23: Do you seriously understand this? Do I really need to explain this?

In the world of HP, there is a division into "clean" and "dirty" blood and this is considered the norm. Children in all seriousness, when they introduce themselves, say that they are half-breeds. Do you understand this? Doesn’t resemble anything? World War II and Nazism. By the way, according to the canon, it was Gellert Grindelwald who started it. But his close friend and lover was Damboldor, who sent him to the resort for all this, one might say, not the death penalty.

In this world there is the concept of "purebred", they are people of the "first grade". Half-breed - people of the second grade. Muggle-born or Mudbloods are third-class people. And finally, Muggles, ordinary people who are considered almost speaking animals.

Do you seriously think that they are no longer scorned for this? But I will continue.

One wizard was able to intimidate the entire community. The wizard defeated by the child. A child who spread rot throughout the magical community. In the world of HP, mocking children is generally the norm, and then pretend that there was nothing. The whole community is hypocritical. I repeat, Volondemort was stopped not by ***** wizards, but by children.

In their prisons are demons that feed on emotions and drive people crazy. But they put him there for any wrongdoing. And even innocent and simply objectionable people. It is inhumane anyway.

I won’t talk about love potions or mental magic, but I’m sure that if it weren’t Rowling’s childhood fairy tale, this would also be the case in the canon. And certainly it would have taken place in real life. And even Madame Rowling herself (or whatever) said something about the fact that Hermione was intoxicated with Ron or his mother, I don’t remember, in particular, to marry Harry her daughter. Maybe the information is not accurate. I already remember badly.

In any case, this is a lousy community. I have said everything.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
He said that he king because he introduce Yasaka as a queen of Yokai, so even though he is not king by deed he is a king still. View More

PanKeRio: A king that did not rule even A Day
Is not a king

He may be accepted as The mate of the Queen
And thus A king
But he is not a ruler in A true sense
He did not make any decision that changed something in The lives of Many people
And Then even yasaka Answers to The shinto gods
So if she were told to do sth she would cuz shes ruling only because of shinto wanting her to do it
Cuz they have sth else to do
It they wanted they could rule The yokai afterall
But hey
Theyre gods
Theyre better than ruling some mortals

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
That is England magical communities or Germany before mr.black take care of it.

Also muggle is a term they used for a long time, I don't say it was not bad nickname for non magical people but if you call them normal people then the magical world is not normal?

You can't just discard something that already been decided long time ago because that's how they said it.

Like we Indonesian calling a foreigner "bule" it may sound rude to other people but that's how we call foreigner. View More

Ryuu23: I do not hate this particular character. I do not like the magical community of the world of Harry Potter in principle. And strong magicians who could influence this swamp, but who do nothing in particular.

To say why I do not like local wizards is unnecessary. This has already been discussed. Who ever loves racists who call ordinary people Muggles?

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
He dont copy any of the souls you know? He is technically a king, a king of Yokai because he is husband to Yasaka View More

PanKeRio: As you say
Its not wrong
But can you call him Then one of those souls He merged with?
Hell no
So why make him behave like he is one?
Technically it is nothing
Just 1 Word difference to be honest
But it matters at least to me and maybe someone else as he recently agreed to A part of what i said already

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
Share it then, i want to know too what make you hate this paticular chp, because you said earlier that you read make a wish.

Also when did the old man act ass all knowing? View More

Ryuu23: I understand what you want to say, but I do not accept this, based on the knowledge that I have.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
No, third true magic make his souls stronger almost the same with gods souls that practicly immortal.


So he will not gain any aspect except personal skill and NP View More

PanKeRio: Now i do understand it better
Although
If he merged with those souls
He should have some of their aspects be it physical apperance
Or maybe A change in mc personality to show that merge
Or if these souls will be fused into him
Then He will no longer be The same being he was
Shouldnt he Then change his name?

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
Haaaa, dude even though Yu stronger than that old man, there is a people that able to see his souls because that is his speaciality from his ancestor able to see souls even though are a god he still able to see your souls even though the old man is weaker compared to Yu or his companion.


As for the souls,it like a dough that able to be merge together with the main dough and create a more superior dough. View More

Ryuu23: I already asked you. Does a colorful ball make the hero’s soul the soul of a Menos, that is, an alloy of other souls? Obviously not.

And no matter who the old man is, the insect cannot see through the creature, stronger than it by orders of magnitude.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
think like this, there is a ball that has four colour on it, does it make it 4 balls with different colour? No

And for homeless people, well he is a desendant of a gods in this universe, and his speciallity is souls and future. View More

Ryuu23: A combination of four souls, what kind of nonsense in general? Is he Menos or what? I read carefully. And that does not make this part less annoying. I repeat, how could he see this? What should it look like? Think about it yourself. If you want to say that his soul has four colors, this does not mean at all that it consists of four souls. I repeat, this is annoying when all sorts of homeless people make such ridiculous remarks. Especially if these homeless people are just small ants compared to the hero.

I like your work, but such moments make my chair burn.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
Alright let me explain

Mr.black will not have a political backlash because he is a death incarnate in this universe and other people know it.

Mr.black already kill the minister of magic and make it look like an accident or suicide.

Mr.black single handle all pureblood and death eater in this universe ALL of them including the one in other country.

Mr.black is the most powerful wizard in this universe.

Yu gain other hero power because he use third true magic that make him able to summon, merge, combine other souls in throne of heroes if you dont like how it work then i cant do anything about it. View More

PanKeRio: 1. If she is to study more it is propable for her to go back
2.If something can go wrong it will to wrong
He made trouble and was last seen with black
Someone WILL go to him
It can be polite visit or not i do not know
But some political struggle is guaranteed
3. He gained an immortal soul along with a power of temporarily fusing with a soul
So how will he now fuse if it is not permament and he can change those souls at will for other
4. Im not upset about him getting powers but The way he got it
If not by his doing be it Direct or not Then i will become upset
He reached for immortality and gained The throne of heroes ok fine
But do not call powers from other souls as his own
Hes merely forcing them to comply
I mean it king Arthur or gilgamesh were to be asked to give up or loan their NP would have they done it?
Arthur no
Gilgamesh would kill

I want it to be real not some unreasonable something

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
Dude did you read it carefully? He say that yu have 4 souls combining as one, no have 4 souls View More

Ryuu23: What nonsense. Assuming that he really can see souls. And more importantly, the soul of someone like a hero. Then he should not have “four” souls, but only one, despite his desire. He does not suffer a split or multiple personality disorder after all. I really did not like such a moment. Especially with the "all-knowing" homeless people.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
Interlude not side story sorry View More

PanKeRio: Well so far i do not see A side story and all I can foresee is trouble upon trouble for black and valerie
I mean hp wizards are one of the most despicable communities
And just The thought of their contracts arranged marriages where you buy your wife
Cuz There is no normal ones
You always have to pay for The bride and write A magical contract
Along with love potions and other mind altering methods or something forcing you to comply even if you do not want to even when u were tricked simply cuz u will die or lose magic
Like life debt
Or contract being accepted if A drop of blood falls onto something

While The original book of hp mat have been written with good intentions
It left so much purely bastard-ish things I cannot count them and I did try once to do so
Really best example would be not having A family name
Say we have medea
The does not have A family name
Cuz colchis is where she was from
Now we have hp verse
Those without family names do not have any rights
Say someone goes up to her and says he Has a deal in this paper for her
And holds it to her
Whats in it?
Normally u would open it and read right?
Well sorry to say if u did accept it into ur hands
It means u accepted The contract
In which states you sold yourself as A slave The moment you Touch said paper

I hate such things with my whole being
As in slavery, mind related stuff, preventing you from making A choice as A whole
As Long as you have A choice i dont Care but in hp verse that choice is almost always taken away and I hate it

So either your unaware how disgusting wizard community can be in hp verse if you were to go for a real experience
Or you want to go that way
Or maybe The more dreamlike path of everything is good And everyone is happy

Sorry if im A bit harsh but i prefer to stay in reality as in real situations
With possible outcomes being realistically possible
Well I gave you one of the mild ones now which I once read in A hp fanfic
It made sense
I mean There was everything to take nothing to lose
Someone now or later would have done this either way

If something can go wrong
It will to wrong
Simple as that

Well but thanks for being more descriptive as it was more pleasing to read with it

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
You never read Make a wish fanfic? View More

PanKeRio: Well so far i do not see A side story and all I can foresee is trouble upon trouble for black and valerie
I mean hp wizards are one of the most despicable communities
And just The thought of their contracts arranged marriages where you buy your wife
Cuz There is no normal ones
You always have to pay for The bride and write A magical contract
Along with love potions and other mind altering methods or something forcing you to comply even if you do not want to even when u were tricked simply cuz u will die or lose magic
Like life debt
Or contract being accepted if A drop of blood falls onto something

While The original book of hp mat have been written with good intentions
It left so much purely bastard-ish things I cannot count them and I did try once to do so
Really best example would be not having A family name
Say we have medea
The does not have A family name
Cuz colchis is where she was from
Now we have hp verse
Those without family names do not have any rights
Say someone goes up to her and says he Has a deal in this paper for her
And holds it to her
Whats in it?
Normally u would open it and read right?
Well sorry to say if u did accept it into ur hands
It means u accepted The contract
In which states you sold yourself as A slave The moment you Touch said paper

I hate such things with my whole being
As in slavery, mind related stuff, preventing you from making A choice as A whole
As Long as you have A choice i dont Care but in hp verse that choice is almost always taken away and I hate it

So either your unaware how disgusting wizard community can be in hp verse if you were to go for a real experience
Or you want to go that way
Or maybe The more dreamlike path of everything is good And everyone is happy

Sorry if im A bit harsh but i prefer to stay in reality as in real situations
With possible outcomes being realistically possible
Well I gave you one of the mild ones now which I once read in A hp fanfic
It made sense
I mean There was everything to take nothing to lose
Someone now or later would have done this either way

If something can go wrong
It will to wrong
Simple as that

Well but thanks for being more descriptive as it was more pleasing to read with it

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
Because that good explaination for a side story, where we will see the reaction of magical world View More

PanKeRio: A good chapter if filler like
The only part that was useless/didnt add up
Was The part where everyone got to know king Arthur is back
Really
What was that for if not for making chaos?
Which u did not use as ur leaving this verse
So why?

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C41
1 week ago
You know what you are right, i will do that next time View More

PanKeRio: Thats nice and all but
What are they wearing?
Hair colour
Eye colour
Half bad as in monk bald
Or literally only half Head got hair on it

For others i have to search on net and it would improve your story As in
Being more descriptive of surroundings People There
Or just stray thoughts about it
Read even once a paper book?
I can right now say about A scene from one which described A castle in winter it took a page or more dont remember how much exactly nevermind
The point is
It wont hurt and for a reader will be more pleasant its like 5min tops to do this
Of course I wont expect same level as pro authors but doing something in that regard will only improve what u write

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C40
1 week ago
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