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An unusual wizard, the Magus of Flowers, will enter this world dominated by magic.
Will his legend be passed down to this world too?
I am a new author, so please, don't be too hard on me.
Also, I would ask you to leave reviews so that I can understand how the story goes, I accept reviews of all kinds as long as they are relevant and therefore, criticism and advice but not random reviews without a valid reason.
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It's a shame you haven't finished this yet. Mavis being the parallel to Artoria for Merlin is quite interesting. Is he going to see Mavis end up the same way as Artoria? Not by having another Kingdom Collapse after becoming king, most likely there will be a bad ending which will greatly affect the story or things will turn out fine, maybe he decides to go the past and ends up in an era that has dragons roaming around seeing as he's overpowered for the main storyline, it would be an interesting idea but this will probably get dropped :(
It's already 4 month...and nothing at all!!! I want more!!! I seriously hope for more chapters, it's extremely frustrating!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The first chapter was well done. I feel like that's something Merlin would actually do if he could (go to another world). Anyway, there's not really much to be said as this only has 5 chapter (at the time this review was made), but I enjoy this. I hope you won't drop this.
This is quite a good story, I'm waiting for more chapters so continue like that and don't drop it.
Overall it's a bit early to judge but, knowing the author and how he's getting better at writing, I'll give trust and review early. Quite everything is on a rate 5 for WN standards, the idea is original and the grammar isn't bad. I particularly love how the characters are interpreted and written though a character like Merlin is really difficult to write so I hope it will go good. The vote would be a 5, though for my ethics I never give a 5 on world building in ff so cinsider it a 5 and give it a try
Personally I love this story. While it starts a little slow the interactions are natural and don't feel forced and as far as my blind eyes can see there weren't any grammatical errors.
an interesting start, hope for more ....................................................................................................
shame on you author, you made such a beautiful story and you dare to abandon it. if you dont continue this story i will curse you to have E rank luck for the rest of your life
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this is great fanfic but too bad its last update was 1 year ago hope this gets continued...........................,.......,................
out of the many FF i've read, urs might be the one of the few that portrays a fictional character closet to its original. IDK why but ur merlin kinda actually seems like the OG merlin, zara and mavis IDK. but merlin yes. so Good job. content wise really nothing much but interesting, merlin in fairy tail. But author I hope u dont neuter merlin, I think this dude might be the strongest in FT cause he was the greatest wizard in fate [personally I think solomon was better]. if u neuter him atleast a proper explanation. Any relationships build dont make lovers useless sluts. Also fairy tail was kinda ruined cause of the stupid power of friendship [POF]. I mean I love this anime but the author deepthroated the POF so much that the fights lost all meaning, if not for the cool animation. so maybe avoid this? IDK , anyway goodluck.