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Capture That Feeling

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Author: Jyojiko

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With the never-ending holiday party at home, no one will miss her if she takes the same flight with that tall boy, right? All she has to do is get on the plane, never mind if the plane will bring her from Oslo to China!

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"Would you like to come into my room, join me with some drinks and hear what I want?" she drunkenly said it at that time.

"Don't worry, I don't mean any harm," she said assuring the man before she dropped herself to the couch.

"Are you traveling alone? Don't you have any adult companion with you?" he carefully asked as he stood in front of Ellise.

"Hey, mister, you must have difficulty understanding, I already said, I'm alone, right?" she answered back.

"You're clearly too young to be drinking alone in a hotel room, in a country where you don't know anybody and on top of that you invited a stranger in your room," he said with concern.

"Why, you're also too young to be having an affair with a married woman, meet her in a hotel away from the city in the middle of the night. How old are you, anyway?" she sarcastically answered back, avoiding the issue of inviting a stranger.

"I'm twenty, and I'm not having an affair with a married woman," he answered with a straight face.

"If you're not having an affair why the two of you clearly look like you're hiding," she said, not planning to lost an answer and question interrogation

"Listen, little girl. You better stop drinking because you're already drunk with all of these expensive wines," he said in annoyance.

"You see, I have a credit card that has no limit, paying for all of my expenses here. I've been here in Shanghai since the first week of January, and today is my birthday. It's almost two months already, but nobody has come or asked from my family if I'm okay." she said in a broken voice.

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JP_TransLaLa

It's almost a relief to be able to read such a well-written romance story. The author has an excellent grasp of language and clear expressions that don't distract you from the story itself. Great job!

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Nicole_99

The MC has a lavish lifestyle. However they are poorly loved and cherished. I find these kinds of MC pitiful sometimes. I'm sure she will be able to find happiness somehow. I loved how detailed you wrote regarding the expressions and feelings of the MC. BTW, she could buy a jaguar and an apartment complex and still have money to burn?! Wow. To be that rich...

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Flowerssss

I'm a sucker for a good romance story line, especially one that doesn't cross the border of being too cliche. I think you were able to develop a good characters. Hope to see more of it in the future. ✌️👍

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Adrian_Roxas_Chan

I like this story because I can relate myself with the writer. This story happens to each and everyone. Kuddos to the writer. More and more great stories to come.

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marga0_0

The main character is totally badass. The plot and the characters have a lot of potential. I wish there will be more updates. I want more interaction between the male and female lead.

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Gaure
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Okay. So first of all, I am not a big fan of romance novels at all. But hot damn, this is good. Outstanding character development! Please keep writing. 😀😅

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terrysandimu8

Wow! Just wow! I'm not through with the chapters yet,but the author already got me. I just had to stop to leave a review first and let others know what they are Missing out on. If you happen to be in the review section trying to see whether or not you should read the book,my advice to you is to just GO AHEAD AND READ THE BOOK ALREADY!! I promise you won't regret. BEAUTIFUL ❤️❤️

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MidGard

So far so good! Carry on please! I can't wait to read more.

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ArkAnghel

Amazing the emotion of the mc touched me and hie the characters made was also incredible hope to read more of the essence of the soon chapters. Pleasee author keep doing moree heheheh I really liked it keep moving forward.

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D_Marvel_2943

I'm enjoying this novel, it unraveling romance story, can keep a reader glued to the screen for hours. Nice storyline. Nice character for the MC. This story is so interesting to bypass. It's all five star rated.

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ShadowPrincess96

A complete new concept of story which is depicted so well! I loved all the chapters & looking forward to it for binge reading❤️❤️ Permanently added to my library ❤️ Good job dear❤️

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Bhapi_Nalapyed

The author had a good quality of writing for the story like this sometimes it's really difficult to be sequential in creating story. In fact, there's always updates and developments in every chapter which I or the readers get more interested to know what will be next to happen. The names of the characters are appropriate to the place where they from. Well, I just can't wait to read more chapters of this story and I hope that it will release soon! :)

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Wateristubeg

The story is so great and your writing quality is the best <3 The MC's character is very realistic that makes the story even more interesting for the readers. I can't wait for the future updates that the Author will give to us.

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Eric_C0te

I'm not into this kind of story but I give it a go because of CTF. I'd say you got a solid story ongoing. Your dialogues are quite realistic and show a lot about your characters. Do you update weekly?

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THE_WORDSMITH

the story is on the right track, the dialogues are also good. It is funny and upsetting at times, as the emotions are described very well. It is too early to pass on a final verdict but for starters, this is very interesting. What I really like is the FL trying to cover up everything by putting up an angry facade, it makes her cute.

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madskie00017

I am truly at awe with how the MC's are being portrayed and written. Stories with sappy, relatable, and emotional connection then you mash it up with romance. We are definitely into a ride for a rollercoaster of emotions. I recommend this story for those who enjoys ****-romance with intriguing plots. I am a certified hooked reader. Keep it up!!

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Allen_Clay012

Good writing and interaction between the characters. That is what I have observed with the first five chapters I read so far. I can sympathize with the main character for having a bad story background, being unloved and unaccepted. I would think that the story may end in a tragedy, maybe, or not. I always hope that she will have a good fate at the end. About the writing quality of the story, it is good as well. I have to repeat that line because your story is quite easy to read, the words goes well, it describes the interaction and relationships with the characters. The words used in the story clearly describes the story and is very understandable. I have a fun read with this story and may post another review soon. I am not a fan of this genre, but your work has changed my mind. I will keep this in my library. My verdict for the rating is 4.8/5.0. Thank you for reading this review, have a nice day! TradeMaker

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deepu_
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I believe MC wants to know about her father but is restricted by her mother side.. Author has explained it neatly and shortly.. MC has a luxurious life and lived in most places, I like it..

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KidWanderer

Ya'll. You gotta cgeck this story. I must say that the author really shares her ideas. Thank you for bringing us another story. Keep goung coz we are waiting. Good job!

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Gourmet_DAO

Yes, China is an amazing country. This is not what you read about him. Seeing Beijing and Shanghai, you realize that the world is big. The novel itself is well written, I liked the first chapters. They are written in a lively, captivating manner, they are full of light. I will read more. I have included your book in my library. Nice text block! Looking forward to new chapter updates!

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