Dc Warlock

LV 4

Juwon_Oh

The first thing that I like is that the author created a new background for the MC to play around in. The author uses the DC world as a backdrop currently, while being a gangster in Macau which I love. The writing schedule he has is also nice. Overall, well-written story that I hope continues and finishes.

LV 4

amaturewriter

Too early for patreo.n author. Write more chps then ask later. The story is interesting though, well the power is. Not much to judge about plot but hope u fk cannon and do ur own shit. The mcs contract based power is dope and op. Seems like u need brains to use it well. Hope mc will be smart and not some perverted retard. If romance just build and dont make em useless sluts or mc a man slut. Gl

LV 3

SageOfSins

as much as you trying to bring a OC in DC it has fail, that in most spectacular ways... -OC giving up benefits of surprise to all the opposition's of MC ( revealing all of his powers) -OC gets power through soul, makes sense he will try to rob as much as souls he could but he doesn't.(kills enemies without even taking their souls.) -could create minions of unquestionable power but still makes only one.(even if he could he should make more by killing most of the goons in city) -MC realize his mistake of not having much agility but doesn't even fix it..(repeating mistakes over and over again) -could wipe the mindslave head of goon but no!!! he is acting as a savior of humanity, when he kill more than ten people in first week of transmigration.(hypocrite) -acts as he is smart, but every developments till now has been brute forcing his way with his power without use of single nuero cell.( dumb brat)

LV 13

Love_Jungkook

You should include HAREM in your tags, so i shouldnt waste my time on reading it. Sersiously its fine if you want to write a harem story but why would you not make it known in some way. Then the people who dislike harem would move on to another story.

LV 4

SkyMnt

Good fanfic with good grammar. We haven't seen much of the plot yet but i like what I'm seeing. I hope author doesn't drop. Keep up the good work author! [img=update]

LV 13

thewayofKABOOMMMMM

honestly, this is like the best dc fanfic and I know that because I have read all dc fanfics that are have above 15 k words, and it's much more than a power fantasy, and if you dun get excited by the prospects of mc's power in a place like dc universe, then you're probably dead inside already😔 jk, but really check this out

LV 2

dag_innuendo

I like the story so far. The ability is unique and reminds me of an old one shot from ff.net "Making a deal with a kawaii devil." The faith energy also seems interesting.

LV 6

vkg313

Overall a great story -Auhor’s writing quality is a little lower than the normal standard, but a lot better than many people on here -Release Schedule is random, however Chapters are very long -Story and Characters are more interesting here and obviously this is the DC Universe so its going to be interesting

LV 14

KaxeCOOL

good quality writing with a nice plot and a weekly update. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................................................................

LV 6

kkjykkjykk

i liked of the history, sorry dont speak english ..................................................................................................................

LV 4

Wellington_Lucas

I'm Brazilian and I loved your DC and Marvel Fanfic, I hope you stay that way Autor-San!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 1

Eduardo_Moraes

Perfeito sem falhas ou erros mas sei que n e fácil mas parece que vc quer abandonar a fic por causa do tempo de atualização aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mts caracteres aaaaa

LV 5

Daohei

I always liked the barter/sell your life/soul for power/wish kind of story, and i have to admit this story is well done. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 1

Eduardo_Moraes

Cara eu te daria meu cu so pra ti não parar de escdever ta muito boa porra aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

LV 2

JPx312

this is the best fanfic in the DC world and there is no doubt about it, first of all the MC is not "stuck" in america, he starts in another country and develops from there, his power is simply the best I've ever seen, very good

LV 13

shadowstriker102

not brain dead includes logic no instant strength character development i wasnt bribed good plot interesting take on dc world random words..

LV 14

stinkclaw

This so far is almost perfectly written as far as I can tell. the MC has power that is while overpowered not very overpowered as it relies on energy source that while renewable is not entirely easy to get ahold of. Not only that he has a relatively linear If not slowly becoming exponential power increase. And the characters so far have responded with in reason. I commend you author you have done very well. I hope to see this story continue for a long time.

LV 5

Alexander_the_grey

I like the story so far, even if the MC’s powers are a bit too effective for every situation. Aside from that, i am quite the fan of the more intelligent and pragmatic approach of the MC and that the established heroes aren’t shown to all be completely adversed to a sort of anti-hero. Hope you can keep writing this story and that you can enjoy doing so.