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After experiencing a hellish youth of isolation and violent bullying, Fen Altairus is starting a new life accompanied by his girlfriend, the pillar pushing him towards a normal life with friends inside society.
But before he could even get a chance to enjoy his new life, Fen's life is ripped away from him and he is shoved into the plans of an organization hell-bent on bringing the forces of Heaven back to Earth to 'save' their world, what will he do to survive? What will he become?
The Virtue Procural Foundation was created with the sole goal of initiation the Succession and bringing all the Fallen races back into existence for the sake of their dying planet, and after decades of planning and resource-gathering, they're finally about to complete their plan. Follow Fen and his experiences within this organization as he struggles to return to his old life.
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Author here! This is my first novel, so any comments and advice on how the writing could be improved would be greatly appreciated! I pride myself on improving over time, and I hope that you can see the quality improvement as you read; the earlier chapters lack the luster that my later writing does, though I do occasionally go back to edit what I can.
Also, this is a slower-paced novel so I'd recommend reading through some of the earlier chapters with an open mind as our MC learns more about the world around him and grows after learning about the Empowered and energy control.
As of September, because of how busy the week is, this story will be on hold until I can guarantee a minimum of three chapters a week.
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I like the way it's going but I just don't understand how he can't have more rage in him. They literally replaced him in his own family then forced him to kill while manipulating his feelings. He's aware of this yet he goes on like he's just a normal dude getting used to life. And how he easily started talking and semi trusting people is just weird. Since He's mad and should be thinking of revenge not how to make friends 101. No offense btw just airing my opinion out.
I read quite a bit of chapters and I'm surprised this novel doesn't have more reviews because I actually think the novel is really good. I feel like a lot of people are going to miss out on this novel so I'm just adding this review to get this novel out to more people. But all in all this is a good novel not gonna lie.
A truly amazing story, hats off to the author for constructing the plot so cleverly. I was hooked by the first chapter and immediately added it to my collection. Great work author!!
SHAMELESS 5-STAR AUTHOR REVIEW! This is my novel, and I hope that you all can enjoy my work! To be clear, I am not a professional author so there will be grammatical and spelling errors throughout the story, but I do appreciate pointing out said errors! They will help me learn and grow and (hopefully) improve the story for you, my readers. English is my first language, but I'm only human (unfortunately) and I make mistakes, so point them out for me please. This is my first attempt at a novel piece, so ANY and ALL advice and/or criticism is appreciated! On to the novel: The introduction will seem slow, because it is, but I urge you to read a couple more chapters to see if the story piques your interest. I worked hard to create a magical system that's interesting and complex. But, because my story has substance, our protagonist Fen won't learn about that system for a good while. I do have a general plan for the plot and the story, but minor shifts do occur within that plan occasionally. I'll do my best to implement that plan slowly, but, once again, I'm not the greatest writer in the world and so I would love criticism. There will be action, a lot of it (Advice and criticism please). There will be romance, and the protagonist won't be ignorant like some other protagonists, but it won't be the main plot point, and the story will be focused on other points. There will be, surprise, blood and violence. I also won't censor because I don't see the point. I update every 3 days, which doesn't seem like a lot, but that's because I write >2,500 words per chapter and I can't write that fast and that skillfully so quickly. I will write unique personalities, funny personalities, and annoying personalities, but, surprise again, I am not the best. Advice and criticism are ESSENTIAL if I want to improve, so if you as a reader want this story to improve leave a comment. You can even call me a terrible writer, but please leave constructive criticism, or else you'll just make me sad with no advice... But above all else: Please enjoy my light novel!