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LV 3

Everton_Mason

I think that these authors create bots and classify their books, it is not possible for this to be good, the words are out of order, horrible grammar, simply unreadable, how to classify what you cannot read.

LV 4

Just_ForFun

this purely a H novel with little to no story so if your into go ahead and their is rape in it so if you are offended don't read this and the girls are sluts so go ahead and enjoy

LV 1

Cute_Romansa

Thank you for reading ,please give a review and feedback to the author in order to be more excited to write... to the reader thank you for reading and for supporting

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

I don't see why others like this. maybe if I get to later chapters I may like it but the grammar is a huge obstacle. it's almost like reading another language

LV 14

herbert

I can understand the writing of a 2 year old better than I will ever understand the author’s writing. I cannot comprehend how the grammar got so bad. I would be suprised if the author is using google translate, because google translate seems pretty good after reading this.

LV 3

Lazy_writer

Good story, it has a lot of future for tasty, just please do not speed up the echos too much and everything will be fine It is easy to read and the protagonist is easy to understand 10/10[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 2

S3X

Fuck the grammar how the am i supposed to enjoy it whin its taking so hard to understand every sentence?!?! gguuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

LV 13

HaremLoverKoneko

Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad.

LV 4

Man_of_culture

How the prick has this Fanfic so many 4-5 star reviews... I mean it is unreadable the grammar is simply trash not even google translate is as bad as this... I don´t mind the FF has no " " but I just don´t understand how some people continue to read this story... Author-sama you definitly need an editor

LV 4

Aria_Ruinz

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LV 3

Sokchev

wish fulfillment is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo strong

LV 14

Alez99

The first thing that should be said is that the grammer is terrible. the first few chapters are basically unreadable although i havent read the later chapters i would assume that it doesnt get much better. As for the plot even for a H story its pretty bad.

LV 2

Kurookami

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LV 4

Delsehup

Sauce pic?

LV 4

8ightbit

I mean, If I must be honest.. A blind person typing on a smartphone can write a better novel than this.. don't waste your time, it's utterly garbage..

LV 1

Lucifer_The_Great9

This is an H novel, so of course it would have a lowish score. Except I scored it low because it is unreadable. It feels like I am trying to decipher some ancient text. Also the pov's change from first to third and it is hard to tell if they are talking or thinking. If that doesn't bother you then give it a go.

LV 4

incognitoyy

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