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An RPG gamer who played the cultivation VRMMORPG ‘The Immortal’ for years, finds himself teleported to a parallel world that resembled the game greatly. He takes on the body of his ascended online character, only to find the once thriving Heaven's in ruins, the thousand year old sects nothing but ancient memories. Follow him as he sets out on a journey to find out the reasons behind his teleportation, and hopefully unveil the mystery of the tragedy that struck the heavenly realm.
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very nice novel, it's just that during the whole reading time I got so depressed that I even refused to eat fried chicken. You realize !! This story is so existing but at the same time very depressing. Reminds me of Li Qiye
I'm not sure why people are falsely giving this good ratings than it actually deserves, are their standards so low? I read 50chap which are free before deciding to stop wasting my time with this. Chapters have so many errors, inconsistencies, grammar, spellings which breaks your immersion, even with readers pointing them out in paragraph comments Author didn't feel the need to fix it, shows much he cares about it. Author sometimes say MC use mana then in next paragraph it's Qi. What?? "I have eyes but failed to see mount tai" typical Chinese saying, tell me is there a mount tai in that game world? if not why did someone from that world say it? it feels so wrong. MC and his friends goes on calling each other brother, brother, brother it's super awkward. His friend spend thousands of years in game before MCs arrival yet there's no visible changes in his personality, he acts like a child along with MC and emotional moments are so forced. Author uses CAPITALS to convey emotions are screaming/anger instead of describing them, feels like it's written by a school kid. Story isn't original either, just another isekai but worse with chinese copy paste. The way they use "hidden" expert and other bs is just ugggh.
The story has a new feeling to me, very well made and makes want to know what happened next. It's quite rare for a novel such as this to be excellent And I hope one day for it to be completed good luck to the Author
TL;DR - great premise, ******* execution. I agree on "hidden gem" assessment with other reviewers. This novel definitely stands aside from many cookie cutter xianxia on this site. As for genre, I'd say it is a xianxia/mystery with a slight transmigration twist. Now, is the novel good? I am... rather conflicted. On one hand, I read all the 60 chapters available in one sitting and am even so impressed I am writing this review, so its definitely not trash. On the other hand I find myself not adding the novel to my library - after getting a solid taste of what is it like I am just not very exciting for the next chapter. Writing quality is average. It could be the author is just trying to imitate (poorly written and translated) xianxia novels, and this is causing his own prose to be generic and uninspiring. It definitely has that cultivation aftertaste - phrases like "boundless heavens", "with a flick of wrist" etc. being peppered all over the chapters. It doesn't quite go down to "repeating explanations several times in a row" type of bad, but still there's much to improve in pure technical writing aspect. For the story, the only good thing for me is mystery. I would honestly like to know how and who is behind the transmigration and fall of Heaven. So, the premise of the story is 5/5, I was hooked from the begging. But again, while the premise is great, the main body of story is disappointing. Its... slap-dash? Uneven, unstructured. Events just happen, it seems - enemies and allies are revealed spontaneously and just as easily discarded. The tone is inconsistent too - at a certain point it was nearly a slice of life comedy! It definitely feels like the writer is making stuff up as he goes, without deeper consideration - so if the writer isn't caring about his world building, why should I?
Welp, Shamefull author here. Hope you guys will enjoy the story, the premise is that of transmigration to a game like world. This is NOT a “Virtual reality” novel, this is a Fantasy one. The protagonist is OP, So there’s that, for those who don’t like a strong mc since the start, this is not for you. And yes, I suppose I should mention that this is not a typical Xianxia novel with people courting death at every turn, the main plot is not the cultivation journey of the MC, the story follows the protagonist on his journey for answers. Well With that being said I sincerly hope you guys enjoy!
Legit one of my all-time favorite novels. Overlord vibes with a real expert instead. MC loves to act like a stereotypical xianxia god cultivator and I love it. The author has also set up the world for the story to reach a decent length. The only complaint might be a lack of romance, but that's kinda personal.
In my opinion this is probably one of the best novel i've ever read. Sorry for not giving u guys better review cuz this is my first time ever giving review. Matters aside, u guys should try this novel.
This is the definition of a hidden gem. The characters are realistic and likeable, which is the biggest problem I find with stories similar to this one. There's this plot line about the players who were isekaied into this world knowing that this isn't real life but can quite remember their original life, which is done very well. The world isn't very flushed out, but then again there's only 39 chapters as I'm writing this review. Overall my only problem is that there isn't enough chapters
I have read my fare share of trash and this is among the top, wonderful premise and the author took a hot and scalding dump on it, don't waste your time.
One of the best out here. This novel really is a hidden gem. There aren’t many novels with characters as complex and well written like this one. Give it a try and you probably won’t regret
this is the first time i ever write a review in my entire life. in my opinion, you are so good t describing the story, the plot, the character,etc. well done and great job. can't wait to read all of the chapters.
This is refreshing in comparison with the rest of the chinese cultivation type of story. Definitely to check if you're curious about it.
This story is a work of art - the characters are witty, well-written and I’m in loveeee. The world development is solid, the pacing is balanced perfectly between large action sequences and then dialogue/ plot progression. This novel is a refreshing take on this genre and I can’t stop thinking about it!!
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this book is amazing and I cant wait for the next chapters to come out. Amazing work author you should be proud of yourself and the work you put in
As of Chapter 38 Writing Quality: 4/5 Decent writing quality with some grammer mistakes here and there. This does not spoil the reading process at all. However, it is not perfect therefore a 4/5 rating. Story Development: 4/5 The progress of the story is pretty fluid so far. However, the meeting with his friend seemed abit rushed. Besides that the overall story progression is good. However, there feels like a few issues. For example in their first fight against the enemy. They said his friend teleported the group far away. However, the phrasing made it seem as if they got back to the mountain in no time. Besides that minir issue, the story was smooth. Character Design: 4/5 The character design for the main character is mediocre so far. He shows a sense of nostalgia but it can be seen as he is not giving a strong vibe that he is himself yet someone else (might be confusing) which he should based of how the character is played. However, the side character is amazing as the show of hardship and stress really comes through to you. Update Stability: 5/5 I do not know how fast and consistent the updates are. I am just assuming that the updates are perfect and daily. World Background: 4/5 Not much is known as the story is pretty short still. But a decent amount of information has been given. However, the power system seems one dimensional right now. As a somewhat wuxia story, there needs to be abilities or skills that enables the reader to visualise it. There also needs to be a form of crafting. Considering the titlte the MC has he should have all these bases covered. So i feel as if the world background is not fully out there yet. Overall: 4.2/5 A good novel so far. However, this novel has alot of potential to become a great one. It has certain key moments that can pull in the reader as well have well rounded characters overall. This is a great story for people to pick up if they are in for the long run. I would personally say the biggest issue with this novel is the lack of chapters so far. As more chapters come in I will come out with a new review. Good job so far with the novel 😁
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Its a good novel with potential, few minor grAmmer mistakes, but over all its a novel that i feel many would enjoy. Though im sure they would love for there to be more chapters released so they can binge it.
To be honest I wasn't supposed to read this because of the lack of chapters and the title, here I thought it would be like those Xianxia sh*ts but then I accidentally tapped this novel by accident since I'm using a mobile, thus since I was bored and nothing to read then I continued reading this...at first this novel Entrance was serious. almost the same as Overlord (Anime) but there are just similarities but when I continued to read till Chapter 3 I got hooked this kind of novel is a gem! glad I accidentally tapped this novel or else it would be left unread in my Library since I've already booked marked it even without reading it.