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Lucas is a CEO vampire who works at a vampire-based corporation where only a handful of humans are aware of their existence. Sara's delectable scent, amongst the human employees, attracted his attention.
As a member of vampire aristocrats, Lucas held a Blood Red Party and invited Sara to be the Guest of Honour, omitting the fact that she will be the main course for him.
Lucas became obsessed with the taste of her blood and wanted to keep her near for a fresh supply of blood. His attempt to seduce her failed miserably. As he tries to continuously deceive her, Sara finally fell in love without knowing he's the predator and Lucas unknowingly fell into his own trap. From prey to love, he was not sure when it all started.
Both never experience love.
Both never understood love.
Join these two as they slowly explore their feelings and embrace what comes their way.
Take a back seat and read how they come to accept each other in their life.
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So the plot is developing very nicely so far. In regards to writing quality, you can actually see the progress the author is making every chapter, which is definitely amazing! The well thought narration and the funny dialogue are just some of the few things anyone would like about this book. Great job, author!
I am still in the process of reading your story, but it is fantastic so far. I like how the story is well developed and the way that you describe things is amazing. I love the excitement that this story brings and the pacing is excellent. It doesn't feel dull and the amount of description you use is respectable.
The plot was steeped in mystery, and truth be told, that did make me on edge, wondering what would happen to the FL. But it’s very complex at the get go with the different reactions of the side characters, namely Bryce and Harith. Here are some of the issues I see here: 1. Grammar— I’ve noticed quite a lot of run-on sentences the more I read as well as incorrect verb tenses. Would recommend you fix it quickly with grammarly or another grammar correcting app as the beginning chapters is especially important to draw in new readers ! 2. Story development & Characters— At first, I was fine, but the more I read, the more confused I began to get due to the flow of the characters’ emotions. It feels slightly forced upon rather than natural. Like for example, when Bryce told Harith about ‘She wanted to keep it pure’, Harith did break down, and I can understand to a certain degree if he recalls something. Yet I also felt it was too abrupt. My advice would probably to look up references of how to show emotions in writing, as it will help in the immersion of your fans. 3. My suggestions for plot— Now this one is entirely my opinion, but I felt the need to say that you may need to give a hint or two about the vampires to the readers early on to hook them properly. Maybe like a more detailed description— forgive my rambling xD All in all though, the story is pretty clean, and I enjoyed it ! So keep up the good work, Author !
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I do not like romance, but the mystery kept me in. The story is funny with your style of writing (although the writing style is not my cup of tea). The story is interesting and not bad for people who is into this kind of story. There are a few problems with your grammar and I won’t lie the dialogue would confuse me between the MC and the guy because they go hot and cold while also feeling cliché. It wasn’t for me. But your story have potential and knows how to keep a person coming back. Keep up the good work!
To all readers who are reading reviews before reading this book, I welcome you to a great hint of mysteriousness combined with fantasy and romantic elements in the first few chapters of the story! You'll definitely get hooked! What are you waiting for? Read this book now~~
Dear author, I REALLY LOVEE YOUR BOOK! It’s incredibly amazing! Looking forward to more chapter updates![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hey, guys! For those of you who are not reading this, I suggest that you read it right now! The story might progress slow in the beginning, but don't let that deter you! This is a wonderful book about Sara finding her way around the supernatural world, with romance and mystery as the side dishes. As each chapter pass, you can see that the author's craft has improved. Give it a read now, and you won't be disappointed. Sincerely, CodeW
HIIIII, at first i felt as if the character sketches of adam and sara were intersecting as they didnt have their own distinct ways of speaking, 88 chapters surely is A LOT. The pick of names is wonderful fyi! Kudos to the writer, the pick of words, the cultivation of the plot and watching it diversify from chapter 6 is intriguing, TRULY. Will add it to my library hehe. I HOPE I COMPKETE IT. NO SPOILERS BECAUSE NO ONE LIKES THEM!
The beginning of the story was exciting. It made me wonder what would happen next. As the story developed, i kept getting more interested because of the nice pace. This is a good book so I planned to keep reading it. It was really intriguing and for a beginner, I think you did a pretty good job.
The suspense, the intrigue, the questions behind, that's only turning the page can answer is in this book; it's definitely an experience of a roller coaster of emotion, a perfect mixture of fears and fun. If you want all of that, go, you got to try this. Of course, nobody is perfect, and there is always room for improvement and talking about improvement. I can sense that the author puts her heart into this story and it shows how her way of writing keeps on improving. For me the farther I get, the nicer is the reading experience.
I'll be writing a review for the first chapter because I'll be silently reading after… the first chapter is so good so expect the next chapters to be good too. The character's expressions are well written. Good luck with this work of yours!
Not bad at all It's pretty decent so far The synopsis is extremely detailed instantly letting you know what you're getting into. The story itself starts off on a fairly good note. Humor was placed here and there which made it a more enjoyable read. I didn't really see anything to mark you down for. This is not my favorite genre of books but I don't want that to affect the rating I'm giving you do take the 5. Good luck author!
The story is developing quite well. The writing quality is a constant change, which is great. You can see the author's development due to this. All in all, it's a great story to read.
i only read a couple of chaps but omg what adrianna's dead?? ahh i'm dying to know what happened to her but oml sara is so cute. your novel is pretty good!! good luck on your writing !!
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Hi author!!!!! I'm intrigued by your writing style, I read a few of your chapters and I saw some errors I hope you will edit them soon. The character starts off by describing their personality and it really did so much for the characters' traits and gradually described their physical appearance. The dialogues were pretty accurate too and some are funny. I hope you keep updating author! good job!
Well, I have read some chapters so far...and the premise was interesting while the story line after that was engrossing even though FL novels are not my cup of tea. The characters are detailed enough but maybe it would be good to make the MC's character more fleshed out. So far, she seems a bit naive? Maybe the character is supposed to be like that and we will see how she develops. The thrills and the mystery in this novel were legit. I am sure some chapters will keep you on your toes. And apart from some grammar hiccups, the writing quality is just fine. I hope the author keeps up his/her work and continue delivering amazing chapters :)
I added this gem to my library for safe keeping! I read up to the 6 chapter and enjoyed it alot! You have very good grammer and I love the flow of your story. Please keep up the great work! Im excited to see where you take us readers.
Impressive plot and intricately designed world background. The concept well thought out from very beginning itself. Good command over grammars and descriptively tailored sequence of events adding to the entire story delectable after taste! Good work author!
Wow!!! Excellent construction of the story! Great action, just from the begging, intersting and expressive characters. immersive dialogues and attractive descriptions. Well done!
Hi Readers, (Not a shameless review but a comment, as you can see from the stars) I am a novice writer, who loves to read and Unknowingly Lost is my first book to begin my writing journey. This is my attempt to write a fantasy romance with General Audience settings in a sea of mature audiences and I wish it would reach a section of the ocean. I am nowhere near perfection but I am willing to learn. As the chapter goes by, I hope my writing skills improved and it makes the reading flow better for fellow readers. Should I fail in that department somewhere down the line, please do let me know because constructive criticism helps in the long run. With that, I end it with a good note - 'knowledge has no age'. Thank you and stay safe! <3 If you enjoy the story, please do leave me a review.