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Imagine that you are a succubus imprisoned in some kind of dungeon.
From what you've seen in the past several days and what you heard from the guards you understand that there's an event of some kind is happening upstairs and the participants are buying up what they considered interesting or expendable from whatever is down here in the dungeon.
You're obviously plotting to escape.
You're now trying to figure out whether it'd be easier to escape if you're bought or would be better to not be bought.
But what happens when a strange visitor offers you 'hope'?
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I would say an excellent book to read in your pastime ! Not only is the succubus, our mc, is cautious and smart with her moves but also making me fall in love with her character more. The way the author writes could be lengthy, but that along with some grammatical errors, which came with it, didn’t bother me much. Just makes it more unique. All in all, I enjoyed reading this ! Keep up the good work, Author !
The story is interesting and introduces the characters pretty well. I like the snall interaction between the unknown man and the succubus, and how the plot unfolds from there. I wish you the best on your book author 👍
Okay! where to begin from... What I most like about your work is how impressive the plot has been constructed with well thought out concept pertaining to mysteries and humour. I like the characters and feel lot more intriguing events to follow by soon. Good job author, it's already in my collection. 😊
This is actually a nice piece. The world you have build is well described with much thought put into the characters. The pace of the story is good and it appeals to me. I would say to pay a bit of attention to commas, but other than that this is good and going to my collection. Nice work, author!
Really interesting story beginning! Your prose flows nicely and your mastery of the language is clear. Great job of editing! Your descriptions are very vivid, and the characters so far are intriguing! I would definitely recommend this book!
While not a fan of excessive exposition, I feel that it fits your story, for some reason. While leaving the man mysterious, you spend more time focusing on the world and the hints of politicks that I'm certain took many hours to plan in the preparation for publishing this story. So, as stated before, the sheer volume of prose and exposition is not to my taste, but I do understand how many readers would thoroughly enjoy this story. Please keep up the good work, and the reads are sure to follow, Author!
YOU HAVE ME INVESTED, AUTHOR-SAMA!!! TAKE MY STONES!!!! TAKE ITTTTTTTT!!! but anyway, I'm really interested in how you will bloom this awesome flower of a novel. Your work have inspired me and I wish wholeheartedly that you wont drop it. I will keep an eye out for your updates. As for plot and writing, you're a 5* no doubt!
Hello, dear author. I must say that I love what you have achieved with your story. So far very good development of the characters and the plot. Each chapter leaves you wanting to read more and more. Congratulations! Keep up the good work!
The Good: The world seems well thought out, but I admit not one that I could get a feel for. Overall, the writing quality is decent, just a few mistakes here or there that aren't unbearable. The Bad: 22 chapters and we still know nothing about the MC except that she is a succubus, but not really a succubus. We don't even have a name for her yet. The characters are bland and need a lot of work, like a name for instance. The one guy at the start seemed interesting, but he's barely around. The Neutral: Great start for your first novel! I have noticed your writing quality improved as the story progressed. I've read 22 chapters and I still don't know where it's going.
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This is actually pretty great. Love how the characters were introduced and the mc is so loveable XD The world building is well done and the story moves along smoothly. Totally worth the read! :D
The introduction was marvelous, I thought it was interesting. When beginning a book, you really want to hold the readers interest and focus, while keeping them entertained. I thought the author did a good job doing that here. It was very well written and very descriptive as well. That was another thing I really loved about this novel. Very captivating and very well written. I do recommend checking any grammarical errors though. I did catch a few while reading, but I think you could do that!! I recommend running them through online apps like Grammarly, or any other grammar error app you may can use!!! Good luck and well done!!! I want to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!
Wow! the author has great quality writing, I like the way she writes the splendidly executed poetic lines. making me have the chills as I read it. A very easy and enjoyable reading to my part. I really like the story and this work was praiseworthy!
The plot of the story is intriguing. It's quite an interesting read. The background of the story is good, without boring the readers with too much details. The world building, in particular, intrigues me. I'll be following this work as it progresses.
Wow a great work! The scenes were vividly described and the transition was superb. It's just flawless. So far, I haven't see grammar issues! Kudos author! I have reviewed yours so please also review mine. Thanks!
Writing Quality: 3/5 Your writing is not bad, but it needs work. The wording needs improvement, capitalization, and punctuation. Updating Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone Story Development: 4/5 Your pacing is really good, and I enjoy the plot of the story. The transition to another character throws me off, but you plotline is good. You executed it well. Character Design: 3/5 It is hard to connect to the succubus as her character is more telling with no depth. Naeth and Timir have more character than her, and the succubus is the most the reader reads about. But that is my opinion. World Background: 5/5 Beautifully done, really paints a picture. I like your world. Keep up the good work!
Let's rate this book with five stars! Everyone who saw this review! Lend me your strength to make the most satisfying review and encourage the author to write more! The story is great and it has potential! Gambatte author nim!
As a person who likes to visualise what I read, this book is nicely written especially the descriptive parts. I can imagine how the scene roll out and even the action scene was describe nicely too - not too much but sufficient enough. It has the element of mystery as well, which made me keep on reading.
I don’t like female lead (and hopefully this isn’t romance, I didn’t notice any in the chapters I read, which is cool). Your worldbuilding is superb, I really got the feel of the story. The descriptions, you gave, painted a picture. The story, although not for me, was good. You have small grammar mistakes, and maybe cut up your long paragraphs. And does the succubus have a name? It is a bit boring to keep referring her as succubus. If she did have a name, I must if missed it. Keep up the good work!
The concept of the story is intriguing. The storyline keeps well the readers attention, characters are expressive, dialogues are engaging, descriptions interesting... I am waiting for more...
Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .