Pokemon: Wanderlust (Hiatus)

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UselessYato

Honestly, this is one of the best, if not the best pokemon fanfiction I’ve ever read. While going off of another author’s idea like many have done; nothing seems forced like most fanfictions and everything is understood clearly. Also have to mention that I’m enjoying the little name references from other things being thrown in. Aerith the flower seller at the end actually just made me smile.

LV 6

OllieZ

You should keep in the synopsis the name of the original fiction and explain people that you're using the novel's idea and tell the differences about the novels. That way you can avoid many 1* in the future. (You can't complain if you still recieve 1* though, you literally copied the first chapter, and many people would stop reading just bacuse of that) Just warn people, and you're good. (It would be better if you had the author blessing, but he stopped writing in 2015 :/) Keep writing! I liked the novel. And I didn't know the original, so... :) Will keep reading!

LV 4

asaade_ragnarokm

for a cataclysm type of fic this is too much of a rainbow and sunshine and not quite dark that supposed to happened, her sister volunteered to be a trainer and she's stupid and yet can pass the ordeal just because of authors plot, its much more believable if she dies since she's stupid and it will be a great motivation to the mc to be much more stronger than he is now, he's only playing and doesn't even have a sense of urgency to get strong in this cataclysm,

LV 13

Skarm

This is my first review ever on this app, so hopefully this holds some meaning. Author I beg of you to not drop this. I love the characters, the world development, the plot, everything about the story i love. I have read others reviews that said you just copied and pasted from choatic world. Although I do see very very similar things, I hope you can put your own twist on things, develop the story in your own way and vision. Coming from a pokemon fan who was been playing the game since i was 5 and semi competitively, I do hope you continue this story with the same consistent updates, and writing you have given us so far 😊

LV 5

SPECTRALE

i am pretty sure i read this story somewhere before, i don't know if it is the original author so i gave it average grading -----------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 1

Osborn123

I am very dissappointed with this story. As soon as I started to read it I became aware that the author was copying the story from "Pokemon: Trainer’s log in a Chaotic World", which is also another story based on a third different story. Still, I thought that this author would just use the intro, or the setting of the story, and then continue with his own work writing his own story. But boy was I wrong! I read up to chapter 14 and the story was still a copy verbatim from the other story. The only thing that is different is the pokemons that the mc gets. Everything else? Exactly the same! Well, by this point it became clear to me that I was wasting my time reading something I had already read from the original.

LV 4

Nadare17

is this dropped.. 1 month of no update c'mon author atleast finish this work for good reputation[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 2

Endless_Suffering

This is actually a really good story even though it's not that "orginal"(let's be honest here this is a fanfic we don't expect "original") the premise is good, the character development is also good, the world is already established as a chaotic pokemon world so that's that overall i gite a 4.6 star☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

LV 3

Kitsunc

There are 7 reviews on this FF, only 7, so don't read them, ignore them, and read it yourself. those 7 people like only 2 of them would be an actual review and the rest are exp.

LV 1

Pokemonfan123

Well.. there are some misconception about this novel... it is a fanfic.. so u can write any thing. But i have to say something If you are basing this novel on 'pokemon- class of chaos' or 'hunger games' please mention that in sypnosis.. the writer from class of chaos or hunger games may not see this... but u mentioning that shows some respect. And the thing that made me ANGRY... There was a review, saying the same thing... it seems to be deleted.. i don't know who did it.. you(cause of bad review) or him/her (cause he/she was humiliated) BUT yoù were harsh on that guy. Dude.. i m an author too.. not light novel one.. so i get your anger when your work is not appreciated... but you have no right to reply harshly..... If you can't even take a critic then stop writing.. me as a reader, i don't just read your novel cause it is good.. i expect that if i gave you a comment .. you will reply nicely... I like your story.. there are many things missing like proper world building and the story is very fast.. but it is good.... But i m not going to be reading your work unless you apologize.... You are making our nobel profession look like garbage

LV 14

plextur_1g

why make such a good book with so little chapters. all In all I've been looking for a pretty good story that actually has romance aspects to it and so far this story fill all of them hoping to actually see the romance part in the future. good book boss.

LV 14

Shadeos

Standard shameless review here as of 28/02/21. I think my writing quality is decent. Though I can't complain if I'm still swamped by low reviews since I did incorporate, nearly identical, a lot of ideas and plotlines from Pokemon: A Chaotic World into my Poke fanfic. But I've broken past that now, and I hope I could still do decent world building and character designs. Updates will not be that stable due to work. I will try to maintain, as best as I can, a regular timetable though. I hope you have enjoyed this so far! xD

LV 14

Glendios

When the author says he's inspired by Chaotic World, what he means is, he's going to copy the entire novel world for world and portray it as his own. Absolutely disgusting

LV 6

CarlosSalazar

A really nice story, that with luck and time will shine as a new gem in the site... it would be ideal if the upload was consistent and the world was better explain but so far a good read

LV 3

HolyMantle

This pokemon story is great <3 EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP

LV 13

KariMo

I am in lovi with this story, i hope you dont dropp it. Thank you for this amazing piece. I also hope he will get athers cool pokemon . Meybe like greninja, tyranitar or a dragon just hope not salamace i dont know why but just dont like them. I cant wait to read whats next. Also its amazing how intresting it is with background and everething. I better wait a bit longer but have amazing next chapter. Thank you for this work, may you insperation never end.

LV 4

Starcat777

This is story is in my top 3 pokemon fan-fic and it’s a very good uniqe story where training pokemon is for surviving. This pokemon story is great.

LV 13

Reyviel_Faesly

An amazing work! 👏 The world setting is realistic even the characters are well fleshed-out! The MC is pretty much close to how a real human acts, feels and thinks. Chapter updates is steady. Great job, Author! 😎 Looking forward for more!

LV 4

herzogs

I loved the background for the story and thought the mc was great. Don't like the random usage of character like cersei tho. Don't see how it was able to add to the story because I dont want this story turning into ****** drama.