/ Fantasy / Falling Into His Trap
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That wizard is dangerous. He set me a trap and I knew it. Does he think I will blindly jump into it?
"Come here," He told me with that deep voice of him.
Does he think I will go if he tells me? Keep dreaming!
"Wait, why can't I control my body? Why am I walking towards him?"
《host, nobody is controlling your body...》
'Oh, shut up, you useless system or whatever you are!'
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This is good, it's light and easy to read, your character design is done well and I love the most is your writing style, great job! keeep it up!
A nice and interesting read. Not gonna lie, I want to see more chapters. I'll lurk and strike when more chappies are out. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
Good start! The storyline is interesting, characters expressive. You wrote nice despritions. No grammar or stylistic errors! Well done! Good luck with your story!
I liked this book. This book was very well written and very interesting I definitely recommend this book to other readers, Keep it up, author.
Great story! I like it so much ;) The idea is intriguing, the characters also. It looks that you already have a concept for the story, Good job! I am waiting for more :)