The Blank Omnitrix

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Jasonenrick

I don't know what you guys think but I always rate Books on Webnovel more subjective than Objective, if you have a problem with that, f_uck off! Writing Quality 5-Stars Story Development 3-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 1-Star Writing Quality[WQ]: First of all, there is not much to say about this one, it's good! Not great but good nonetheless and it's Webnovel so we * the readers * don't expect a masterpiece! Story Development[SD]: Personally, I don't like it! But it certainly isn't bad; in an Objective perspective! The Story doesn't develop too slow and not too fast either for my liking. What gets on my nerve is the way it is going and with it I mean the end Goal; if there even is one! Character Design[CD]: First and foremost, the Mc doesn't have a backbone and probably won't ever have one. The author tries to make/describe/write the Mc a bit dominant and powerful but honestly fails miserly with it. Updating Stability[US]: I think it was one chapter a day till yet and that's good so there isn't anything to explain to this topic. World Background[WB]: What you * the reader * realizes very soon and fast is that the author adds characters to Universes and alters them so that his Story doesn't get boring and to keep the reader interessted, which in my opinion isn't a bad thing; but the author fails yet again( In my opinion ). The Mc seems not to be able to get any more powerful because the author always adds things and characters so that the Mc won't ever be a bit overpowered but more like above the norm or above average. This results in the Mc being looked down upon and being played with by his enemies; read the Novel/Book to know what I mean. All in all, it's a good read but not one I would continue to read or support because it isn't my style. And don't get me wrong, I have read Novels where the Mc is like glass and gets killed by nearly everything or Novels where the Mc is a little kid for the whole Novel and won't ever get powerful or overbearing. Anyways, that's my review and how I view the Novel! Bye, lovely holidays, and don't go out, or Corona will get you!

LV 4

Saintbarbido

I am the author of this book so of course I would give myself five stars. I wanted to write something a bit different, where the characters have their own diverse personality.

LV 5

Flat_Moon

This way better than I expected. The story as I understand is not about simply being a Hero but Chris (Mc) coming to terms with being outcasted again even after being reincarnated. The explanation for his ability's are detailed but not enough to feel like an info dump. I really love this novel keep it up

LV 13

Masterofall1

The writing quality is okay. Updates are Meh, seeing as this is scheduled for a rewrite. Story Development: Now this is honest to god, the most frustrating story development I've seen in an FF, How is the MC suppose to do any kind of story development and or character development if he keeps getting chased out and beaten down and EVERY SINGLE UNIVERSE HE TRAVELS TO, HOW IS THE ROD/ROB allowed to due that to a mortal without other ENTITIES GETTING MAD AT HIM???? THE ROB IS LITERALLY MESSING WITH THE REALITIES/CHARACTERS OF THAT UNIVERSE / MULTIVERSE OF OMNIPOTENT BEINGS?? DOES THE PRESENCE NO LONGER HAVE ANY PRESENCE IN DC OR DOES THE ONE ABOVE ALL NOT HAVE ANY SAY IN MARVEL? HOW WOULD FATE & ROD/ROB be able to due anything WITH THOSE TWO SAFEGUARDING THEIR Multiverses in the omniverse? World Background: Ties into my point about character design and story development

LV 4

PickleMe

I am out of words on how to describe this novel. At first look it is so horrifingly random, you would be lost mid speech. At one point everything makes sense, due to author enjoying the fkups the mc goes through. The mc is basically someone who doesnt learn and if it werent for the fact the story revolves around him he would be deader than dead. I stress the fact that each power up the mc is given is so conviently fitting,yet still every next enemy would be like huh that's cute. i somehow fear how long the mc will be a punching bag. Not recommended for those who like slice of life or true op mc or even a obvious plot. I do how ever recommend it to people who like underdog mc who pretty muchs crawls up, and those who like twists in plot twists

LV 4

AXEL_HELLFLAME

great story 10/10 would recommend though the updating stability is not that good great story 10/10 would recommend though the updating stability is not that good great story 10/10 would recommend though the updating stability is not that good great story 10/10 would recommend though the updating stability is not that good great story 10/10 would recommend though the updating stability is not that good great story 10/10 would recommend though the updating stability is not that good

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Z3RG102077

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yonathan_diaz

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LV 13

skulputulurubug

read at your own risk, reading NTR is more wholesome than this, from the start mc kills himself gets bent over by ROB, then he goes to marvel where ancient one rekts his A hole, then goes to dc where wonderwoman trashes him then he runs away almost gets mind slaved then gets his holes filled

LV 4

Boxer_Vivek

I've read your Power Triumphs All and was reading this too, but there's a certain aspect about his soul being marked or sealed, his fate being controlled and his powers being nerfed that I don't like. I mean if it was only in one book I'd have thought that you taking on this interesting routine, but I'm both books, it kinda doesn't feel good.

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Weirdo

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peixe_do_dallas

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madman1010

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