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Who need one of these when you can read the story
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ceritanya menarik saya harap anda tetap mempertahankan tempo dalam cerita dan jangan memaksakan sesuatu seperti fanfict lainnya , menurutku ada bagian² penulisan yang masih Terbongkar , semoga kedepannya lebih maju
pretty good word count and update so far, grammar could use a little work but other than a couple of typo's good start. if you keep writing for 50+ chapters this could be in the top 50🤔 character is a bit depressed/edgy but who's isn't, maybe don't follow the cannon completely and no harem but other than that I think this is good.👍👍👍👍👍
Author Dragon_Lord_KuroII
Hate fanfics where the mc is a reincarnated person but for some reason “loses” his memories lol he remembered everything and once he went to bed the body that he created but is somehow somehow someones actually body he gained 14years of memories at once and now he barely knows anything from his past life. Was a waste of time reading lol if that chapter was completely rewritten then this couldve been a good fanfic
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