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20-year-old Evangeline was shunned since she was a child. Seeking a purpose in this world, she rises through the star industry to become the most well-known and respected singer in the world. But even with the love and admiration of the people, she still feels...empty. Like something was missing. The night of the hit of her career, she was pushed down once again. But this time permanently.
Little did she know, it wasn't the end of her yet. She was guided to another world, a world filled with mysteries at every corner. A world of magic. A world that needed her to save it from the verge of collapsing. Will Evangeline finally find her true purpose, or will the enticing peace of darkness take over...?
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Write a reviewThis is so nice! I am enjoying every single word that was narrated by the author. This deserves praise! I am jealous of the author's talent on narrating things. I am very lame when it comes to it! Grammar wise, your novel is outstanding in that cause it was your first language. And lastly, your story is the best ๐ I am praying for your success!
Overall, not bad. The story progresses at a smooth pace and is pretty engaging. My one work on point would be; don't be afraid to make shorter paragraphs. I feel like you could really benefit from adding a bit of space between some sentences. A lot of people on the site are mobile users and that sort of thing makes it easier to read. Good job so far!
Your story is very interesting. It starts off slow, and you make a great transition into a more exciting scene. The story starts off like it's going to be some kind of book about singing, but it quickly dives into another storyline, full of mystery. I love when stories do this, so I may be a bit biased lol. The way you take your time to describe what's going on is amazing. The first few paragraphs don't explicitly state what's happening, but you still completely understand what's happening, if that makes sense. Overall, great writing, and it's a very unique story.
Being a singer myself, i can totally relate to Evangeline! It's well written, only with a few grammar errors, which i'm sure will improve as the author continues writing! There is definetely potential, and i'm in love with the plot of the story. Good job, author! Will come back to read more <3
I like this story from the first chapter. The entry of the story made it feel grand. The death by sister is something i like. The pacing of the story is awesome as i get more intrigue wondering what and how MC power is used how her voice and shapeshifting has a link. Really gets me hooked and wondering what is coming next.
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it.
Great characters, with a great connection to the characters. This is a gripping tale, well told. My only request would be for the author to give us more description to the overall world. What is happeneing and when. But that's a minor nit-pick, as this is a solid work and a joy to read.
I really enjoyed the read and I'm already waiting to read more. I kinda enjoy reading your narration and it's really wonderful. I wish there were more chapters. Anyway, all the best on your book. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Oh my goodness, Queen, take all the stars because you deserve them all. This novel is so, so beautiful. The melancholy bittersweet atmosphere at the start slowy transforms into something truely poetic. I love the main lead, she is strong, determined, I like how she has flaws, but also keeps her goals in mind! Some excellent side characters- I loved the grim reaper and am hoping in vain he will make a reappearance. They are all really dynamic, and the way their personalities interact with the lead is fantastic!! The way it is written is so eloquent and detailed, and the author did an amazing job of portraying the world surrounding a character who has lost her sight too! Im really enjoying the plot, this book is a real hook! It certainly will be staying in my collections! Author, you have done an amazing job!