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Han Tian, a seventeen year old loser with no motivation, had enough of his life. Bullies mercilessly beat him up and the school can do nothing about it. His parents, who had found no other choice, sent him to learn martial arts under his mom's suggestion.
Question is, will Han Tian survive?
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What I like about this book is the lessons it offers, it don't only gives you recreation, it's talks about our youngsters usual dilemma in school. It is inspiring and more than that it gives you knowledge on that field, since the writer do matial arts himself. More power to you author.
This book starts off with a intense scene that will have you rooting for the main protagonist from the start, a young man who’s determined to face his challenges head on. This author does a nice job building suspense and writing with vivid detail. I can’t wait to read more. [img=recommend]
It reminds me so much of myself but with wrestling instead i had to give it 5 stars. And grat work author everything is clear and precise and the information and grammar is correct thanks for the great read.
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you have a good story line but what I do suggest you do is start start your synopsis with a dialogue between the seventeen year old boy and his bully/bullies. And give your viewers a little bit more description about the kid, but overall your story is amazing, keep up the good work author because it doesn't stop here for you[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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You guys should read this book, it has some really good lessons as well as good character development. I liked how the story flowed from chapter to chapter. Give this book a read guys.
The story is relatable to our daily lives where weak are bullied. It made me remember the movie karate kid I had seen in childhood. Dialogues are good, sentiments are well described. The book is written perfectly and well edited. Good work author
Nice premise! I gotta say I'm hooked! I really like martial arts novels and this is right up in my alley! So far the description was top notch and the story was commendable. Actions were vibidly narrated. Good luck and congrats author for the job well done!
This is my first time giving 5* to a review. I have never gone beyond 4.8 before [Except for my own Novels. LOL ;) ] Now, let us get going- Writing Quality: Amazing! Conversation Style. Use of Japanese terms. A bit of humor. Just perfect. Stability of Updates: Consistent. 1 Chapter a day. Story Development: Super Good. Just love the natural flow of the story. Character Design: A school kid being bullied and parents who help. Unlike other anime and manga where the kids hide the bullying or the parents are too busy to care or know. This novel takes the logical approach. World Background: The setting is a world which is REAL. Which is logical. With which we can connect to.
This book is without doubt a gem. I think readers at all age levels can relate and learn from Han's experience. Han starts with a hopeless situation. But it's heartwarming to be reminded that there's still people who still care about Han. I love the central idea of the story: don't give up. Push through. Even if it's hard, things will get better. Great job! Keep it up!
Yo read some of your chapters and dang, its good. I like how you have shown elements of the real day to day things. And the impact it has. Way to go!!
Loving this work so far. Enjoying the ongoing references to Dragon Ball z, which was one of my favorite TV shows growing up. This story starts with a bang as the protagonist is saved from taking his own life and moves at a great pace as he takes up martial arts training. And even though he comes off as kind of hopeless in the beginning, one can't help but cheer on the protagonist. Also of note, the fight scenes in this are on point.
I'm glad I have a chance to read this kind of story. On how a person's lack of confidence on something, I can relate. Through this, I've had something to learn that concerns in real life. Great work author! Keep it up❤❤
Just read chapter one already, with the storyline buildup, I'm giving the author a five-star rating. Nice start out to a novel could get anyone glued to it
An interesting read. The topic in this story is a real issue and one that people don't really acknowledge. It's unfortunate that people are subjected to this sort of thing. Good job author.
This author has a knack to create the characters which you cant help but connect with them. And the world description- he truly has a gift of painting such vivid scenes. I enjoyed reading them and would recommend to everyone
First of all, I really love this book🥺🌹❤, your descriptions are top-notch and it's good cos it really helps in visualizing the whole training process☺🥺. Your writing is almost seamless, you're an amazing writer, keep up the good work Author🌹.
The startup of the novel being a dialogue scene is epic, the translation and description are simplified. I love the dialogue and how they relate. The writer did a great job. Kudos
what I really like about this Book is that it is expressing emotions. The first chapter started dark and it is very interesting. hence, I definitely recommend this type of genre.. very jaw dropping.
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What I really like about this story, is how its very detailed with description. You could actually learn to do some of it based on the author's description alone. There's also some funny bits along the way that made me laugh and the real reason why I actually enjoyed it is because it's a relatable story to real life situation. Esp in times of need, when the world does not feel fair anymore, we tend to forget those around us who really cared. And this story, is one of the many motivational ones that might actually help and save those readers, and motivate them. hope you continue to write more Author 😍
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