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it's only two chapters in so far I like it, and I'm looking forward to more chapters. now I will be just typing to get to 140 so I can finish the rating, and good luck to you arthur.
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
Iโm really enjoying your story thank you. I donโt know how to write a story or what makes one good honestly all I know is that I look forward to new chapters and that reading this story brings me a small joy please keep writing and improving your story
Easily one of the dumbest MCs you will ever read about..... the guy makes the dumbest decisions and he hasnt planned ahead in anything......
Good so far but there are some spelling and grammetical errors. The dailouge needs working though because it feels slightly off . The MC is too naive as shown till now . anyway the story is better then 70% of other stories .. enjoy
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Author skinwalker112
Writing Quality- grammar is good compared to others novels on this platform but the spellings are really bad. Story development- very stupid mc is doing dumb things and taking decisions and career choices that are so stupid it's like he's asking to be shot in the head. Character design- mc is retarded and a dumb brute for the most part even if he says otherwise I mean his power allows him to adapt so I understand that your first thought would be get your head kicked in so the body grows stronger but his power also makes him smarter yet he focuses on getting his ass handed to him despite becoming a business man like lex Luther he wants to dabble in the Gotham underworld where literally everyone is criminally insane. And then he goes to a underground fighting scene a gives his real name, that's just stupid in the face of it even Peter Parker had the common sense to change his name. then he helps harley Quinn god that's the most retarded thing I have ever seen Updating stability- meh World development- literally nothing. Author expects you to know everything about the world and it's location or expects you to google it. I have no intention of discouraging or insulating the author it's just my opinion it has absolutely no worth in it.