True Demon in MHA

LV 3

JackbladesFF7

Honestly everything about this fan fic is great but sadly i will have to drop it This is not due to any of the writing but its because the love interest semmes to be Uraka or however you spell her name and i can not read a fan fic with her as the love interest. This is just a personal opinion if you do not care definitely give this fan fic a chance

LV 12

Asmodai216

Good enough grammar, it's actually readable, so that's a plus. Updates come out pretty frequently. The pacing of the story is a bit quick, but that's better than spending fifty+ chapters on the first year of childhood like some authors tend to do. The character design falls a bit flat for me. Gonna be honest, the MC doesn't seem like he has an actual personality beyond bland, nice guy, everyman. It's not that bad, but it isn't anything great, or even good. Just kind of a meh protagonist. Kind of like that dude from In Another World With my Smartphone. The world background is the part of this that actually bothers me. Like, the dude gets a Demon System, and it would be interesting to see how a relatively normal, goodish guy handled a system that rewarded horrible behavior. Trying to find a balance between being a monster, and keeping your morals in the face of ever increasing rewards would be an interesting plot point, or it would be if the author wrote that story. Instead, the Demon system seems to pander to the protagonist in ways that really, really don't seem even remotely demonic. Like, he gets sin points, not by killing anyone (though he can and chooses not to), but by beating up child bullies and having them confess their sins, or by catching a thief. Basically, the "Demon" gathers "Sin Points" by doing good deeds. It is a mechanic that shouldn't bother me, but it really, really does.

LV 5

xenobilo

It's just a fanfic, maybe some consider it of low quality as I do. I will explain the score. 1- the writing is probably with several errors since I use Google translator. 2- I will publish a chapter a day, maybe I will publish two times depending on how many I have accumulated. 3- This is the first time that I will try to finish a story, so I will be realistic and say that it may not be good. Of course, this will depend on my improvement that will happen with the practice. 4- The character (Gael) tried to make him different from the other main characters in my previous stories, who did not express many emotions. This is something I'm still bad at, but I believe I will improve in the future. I just wanted to ask them to make constructive criticisms instead of cursing me or the work. Just say the mistakes and what you didn't like. Thanks for listening.

LV 2

the_panda_manda

its pretty good but is it translated because sometimes it says peculiarity instead of quirk and things like that. . .

LV 10

Doublenile

been 2 weeks and no chapter so i assume its dropped. dont bother reading. Should author start again then delete but so far seems to be dropped

LV 13

I_am_inevitable

Pretty good.

LV 14

yokedjaguar

Useless character, he knew what he was getting into and yet he doesn't even do simple muscle building exercises, this is going to be complete system dependent story.

LV 4

MONARCHOFSTORMS

Well so far the story hasn't progressed that much but it's alright so far in my opinion. The updates time is alright if it was more chapters out it would be better because the cliff hangers are killing me.

LV 3

Gwlgaming

The writing is bad everything sounds stupid when you read it sometimes its ok but most of the time its really bad i dont like ururaka as the love interest i think its boring and basic and also thats supposed to be midorias love interest thats all just read the sentences before posting it please

LV 1

RaxO5

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Stiven_Callejas

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victor_dupretz

More please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!!!!!!!!!

LV 4

SpoiledSecrets

It’s good but the way the author is taking is making it worse. I can already tell there’s going to be a harem. Plus the mc is kinda annoying saying every guy is annoying and only talking to girls

LV 3

chakibo

good very good

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RudelRammler

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madman1010

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Henrique_Paiao

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