Eternal Universe Online: From NEET to NPC

LV 13

Akkre_Kojuuin

Writing quality could use some work but it's readable. Updates are somewhat consistent. I release on a schedule of every other day, but exceptions include when I'm not feeling well and some holidays that I sometimes don't even observe myself (I'm lazy, give me a break). As I'm writing this, updates are in an odd spot since I need to write up the outline for the 2nd volume and my family is currently in the process of moving. Personally, I think the story is coming along nicely, not great, but good enough and at least a little more consistent compared to my previous story. The same goes for my character design, I think it's better than God Slayer, but could still use some work. Worldbuilding is probably one of the stronger things about this story and the only thing I feel I can give 5 stars. Even then, I still feel as if it could be better.

LV 13

NoHaremSect

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homeofthelostqueen

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LV 3

Pretend

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LV 3

Yumbrella

How isn't this novel not having enough reviews?? Seriously though I expected at least a few dozens of reviews for this novel. I wouldn't even be surprised if the novel has a ranking even. I mean it's seriously a stellar novel in its own specific category. Alright for any new potential readers, ill try my best to explain what you can and CANNOT look forward to in this novel. The writing quality isn't perfect but not exactly bad. The spelling mistakes are rare and the grammar is good. The narration style is really good and I would dare say it's almost equivalent to those of the top-tier Japanese translated light novels. It's ridiculously funny for me personally and I guess most would agree with me. Please give a few chapters a read and I think probably you will love them? Updates for me personally feel a weak point for this novel, the chapters are pretty much the standard size but the chapters are released like 1 per 3 days on average. Although selfish, I wish the update rate was at least 1 chapter per 2 days. DONT READ THIS NOVEL FOR PLOT! to be honest, this is a novel almost solely for humor. it's like destined to make people laugh and nothing else. Even though the world is supposedly a "Gameworld", it doesn't really affect the plot in the least. Actually, it's almost downright forgotten. but I really really beg of you to read the novel because plot or no plot, it's so much entertaining. The plot is silly if not, very very weird. I love the characters! and probably you too if you start reading them. MC and her gang, every one of them is unique and hilarious. probably you are going to feel attached to them in no time! Yesh, some characters are downright forgotten BUT overall most characters are absolutely amazing. Author-san, if you read this, please make some more side stories from the perspective of others because everyone one of those side stories was really really good. For now, there is no romance and I like it that way in the future as well. the dynamics between the characters right now are really good and I don't really want love to spoil it. BUT I will again say here as well that the friendships and relations between the characters are absolutely for humor and is absolutely not "standard" relations. The world is really weird. I don't want to spoil but I will say that it's a rather bizarre world and this novel is probably a mixture of a million genres. It's probably better to state this novel as a crossover of a bunch of novels and anime to give you a plot that will make you laugh till lose your breath Okay now that's it is about my opinion on this novel! and if you are reading this author-san, I would like to suggest that you change the book pic because it's kind of boring, to say the least. If possible a better title might also be really good since the title of the novel right now is kind of average and won't probably attract the readers to enjoy this novel!.

LV 11

Tuck_Javlin

I enjoyed reading God Slayer and am happy to see another story connected to it. In my opinion, the character development is even better than God Slayer. Though it was great in God Slayer too.

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StolenPasta

The story is good, the characters are likeable and the plot is rather different to other mc is npc type novels. Only concern is updates.... But its a great novel!

LV 11

MizKano

Hey author!this novel have nice story development[img=recommend].Just fix the writing quality✌🏻. Thanks for the chapters.Sorry if you can't understand cause I'm not a native with English language.So more chapters pls!!.[img=update][img=update][img=update]