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I love you" doesn't always mean "I'll stay."
{February 13, 11:59 pm}
Lucas: It's all my fault. I'm so sorry. Remember that I will always love you my moonshine.
{Sunday, 6:00 am}
Erin: What are you speaking hon? Sorry, I fell asleep. Why didn't you come home?
Seen
Erin: Hon?
Seen
Erin: Why are you not replying?
Seen
Erin: Please say something. Is it due to work? Or something else?
Erin: I'll get back. I heard some loud noise outside the house. You better have replied and explained things when I'm back.
Seen
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During the night before Valentines', Luke Maygram sent a mysterious message to Erin Beverly. The next day the world turned upside down as a break out of zombies changed everything.
Left with the only text she got from her fiance and the mysterious 'seen' in her every message, she decided to look for him.
But will she able to make it and see Lucas again? when the world becomes a living hell?
Will love still conquers everything on end?
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Disclaimer: This story is pure fiction. All the names and places you might find similar are purely coincidental.
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A/N: This story is made by me, Lala_sanara, and my co-author and friend Ysaa.
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I just noticed that I was asked to review the other novel, HAPPY EVER AFTER, and not this one. Well, guess I'm doing both! The Good: The characters are solid with enough backstory that one can relate to them. The author has created a fairly interesting premise and kept it unique enough that it doesn't feel like every other apocalypse novel out there. The Bad: Grammar mistakes galore, but I feel like it is a result of translation so if I consider that then it isn't so bad. The story itself is great and well-paced, but I feel like it doesn't know what it wants to be. (It starts as a sad drama, then a happy romance, and then an apocalypse survival.) Suddenly saying "12 years later" really forces the readers to make a lot of assumptions. It would be nice to know how Lucas and Erin met again considering they escaped a plantation from somewhere when they were kids. The Neutral: While the plot is fairly entertaining, having us assume so much about the world, Emily, and Lucas makes it very easy for people to get the wrong idea about how certain events actually happened according to the author. I do understand that the author is not forcing the reader through the plot and that's good, but we still need a little guidance. The author should try to be careful with the timeline... the kids were ranging from the ages of 8-12 in Chapter 2 and Lucas was on the plantation for 5 years in chapter 4 so we assume he is 12 at the time of the escape. Strangely, the older kids never bothered trying to escape you said, so is Lucas the exception? The author struggles a bit with translating certain tenses, but I do see that those become less and less as I got further into the story. Keep it up and do not stop writing.
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After reading for a while, I observed that the author improved with his writings. It was difficult at first but you will get the hang of it in the future. With few edits and finishing touches, this will improve in terms of quality! I gotta say I'm inpressed with the author's growth! What a nice feeling of your brethren improving!
It touched me deep.It was very sad😭😭. Very brave of you to write about such a sensitive subject. Well done and keep going. It has potential dont give up.
Overall was a solid story, I would mention that some words are repeated and the descriptions are a little weak. Also more adjectives could be used in the story to draw the reader into the story more. World background so far is a little incomplete but it could just be that way for the mystery. Looks good overall, keep up the good work :)
It is a really good story with interesting characters. While there are a few grammatical errors, the story itself managed to draw me in. Improving your grasp of the language comes with practice, but having a good story and concept aren't that easy. This story has the potential to become a great one. Keep up the good work.
The story is quite intriguing and the progression is good. Writing quality seems to be getting better by the chapters and I find myself wanting to know more about the events that enfolds. Overall though, I'd advise author to keep up the pace and also edit the previous chapters as you progress
After reading a couple of chapters of this book I consider you say that it has a good overall tone and the author really pays attention to the details and progression of the story. There's still some room for growth but so far from what I've seen it's looking good .
Plenty of ideas on that book, and I honestly thing that there's room to develop them more. We want to live with the characters, fear and tremble with them, be happy with them. Those four chapters could be, in my opinion, at least 10. There's so much to say about it !
Great story, please keep up a good work Author. Great Great Great Great Great... Wish u to achieve what ever you striving for. The potential is not limited:)
A Science Romance that in its first 5 chapters already has 2,228 Views. What the author raises. Author: Aeipathy_02, in Seen Zone Z, in genre. Sci-fi Romance. The synopsis has this romantic premise: "I love you" doesn't always mean "I'll stay." The family routine changes from one moment to the next, even in the notions of the reality of the children, some say they robbed us, others it is a kidnapping. Being sold over and over again, they arrive in fields where they will work as farmers, with uninhabitable places to sleep. A harsh reality, mentionable as science fiction to digest the reading, if I encourage to cry or reproach fate.
This novel is awesome! I have been already hooked up with the beginning of this novel. The plot is also exciting and entertaining. Can't wait for more chapters! I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author.
Interesting plot, and it's very addicting to read. I love the book so far and I hope the author keeps up the great work! I'm glad I got here in the early stages of this story because I know it'll be famous in the fututre
From just 4 chapters, it's hard to determine where the story is going, but so far, it was easy to understand, and I think the novel definitely has potential. Keep up the good work!
I was wondering why "Seen Zone Z". It synopsis does explain that the world they're living in, turns hellish when Erin received a message from her fiance. A journey in where all reader will be curious whether love still able to conquer all or not? Follow the story to found it out
Good work. It's easy to follow and to imagine what's going on. Maybe the romance thing happens too fast but this is only the beginning of the story. This will turn well with the time of course.
Well....I was hooked when I read the synopsis. It was something new, mysterious and made me curious. Then, I started reading. The story development is too good. Lucas and Erin.....aww so sweet💖😍 Loved how they met, how they escaped, how they remained together and how they became engaged. I would love to know more about them. Now let's get into what puts me off about this book: language. Grammar is a mess. Hope u will proofread it soon. After all the book has just got started. The story has great potential. As soon as you fix the grammar, imo this book will be super✨👍
The story has a fascinating plot; writing quality gets better with each chapter. Doing great this is amazing!! keep it up!! Has a great concept, with more chapters I believe this book would be a very interesting read!
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First of all, this is a great first piece of writing material, great imagination and took me straight into the scene with some descriptive world building. Very diverse with characters mentality who share the same situation which is good, very realistic. Author just needs a little more work with sticking in past tense or present. Keep up the good work! I'll look forward to your improvement and the rest of the series!
Such a great story! I am looking forward onto your next stories. I am grateful of knowing and reading this story. I hope this will get published hahaha. Keep it up! 💛✨
Wow, both a chilling start, and very sad, I am touched. The writing is good quality, and the overall story has a good element of suspense and intrigue that made me want to keep reading on. A few occasional grammatical errors but overall, a really good read! Nice work author!